Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“forgot”应为“forget”，且“memories things”应为“memorising things”。建议注意时态一致性和单词拼写，同时回答较为冗长，建议简洁表达。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget the steps I need to take in a project.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“attend to the school”应为“go to school”，“for my parent”应为“for my parents”，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和表达清晰。

例: Yes, when I was 13, I forgot to go to school for an important test, which made me and my parents very disappointed.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“do the practice on the English”应为“practice English”，“having a test”应为“have a test”，且句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意动词形式和句子连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to practice English because I have a test next month and want to improve my skills.

提案: 回答中有重复词“take take”，且表达略显口语化。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达，如“write notes in my calendar and highlight important dates”。

例: Usually, I write notes in my calendar and highlight important dates to help me remember important things.

× Actually I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I will forget what the next steps I need to do and I will forgot the process of the project.

✓ Actually I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I forget what the next steps I need to do and I forget the process of the project.

这里的错误是过去时态使用错误。'will forgot'是不正确的，应该用一般现在时'forget'，因为描述的是经常发生的事情。建议将'will forgot'改为'forget'。

× So I think that I'm not good at memories things.

✓ So I think that I'm not good at memorizing things.

这里'memories'用错了，应该用动名词'memorizing'来表示记忆的动作。'memories'是名词，不能用在这里。

× I forgot to attend to the school to take my progress test, which was very stressful for me because the test was very important for my parent, to my parents and I really feel disappointed since I affect their experience.

✓ I forgot to attend school to take my progress test, which was very stressful for me because the test was very important to my parents and I really felt disappointed since I affected their expectations.

'attend to the school'中的' to'是不必要的，正确用法是'attend school'。'important for my parent'应为'important to my parents'，表达对父母的重要性。'feel'和'affect'时态应与过去事件一致，改为'felt'和'affected'。另外，'experience'应为'expectations'更符合语境。

× I think the things that I have to remember in my daily life is remember to do the practice on the English.

✓ I think the things that I have to remember in my daily life is to remember to practice English.

'do the practice on the English'表达不自然，正确用法是'practice English'。此外，'remember to do'后面应接动词不定式。

× It's quite important for me 'cause I need to improve my English skills and having a test next month, so it's quite things I need to.

✓ It's quite important for me because I need to improve my English skills and I have a test next month, so these are quite important things I need to do.

句子结构混乱，'having a test'应改为'I have a test'，'so it's quite things I need to'不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Usually I would take take down the notes on my calendars and I will like highlight the important date or the important things that I have to do.

✓ Usually I would take down notes on my calendar and I would like to highlight the important dates or important things that I have to do.

'take take down'重复，应改为'take down'。'notes on my calendars'应为'singular calendar'，且不加定冠词。'I will like'应为'I would like to'。'date'应为复数'dates'。