Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复，且句子较长不够简洁。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget the next steps I need to take, especially in complex projects.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和时态，表达更清楚。

例: Yes, when I was 13, I forgot to go to school for an important progress test. It was stressful because my parents cared a lot about it, and I felt disappointed for letting them down.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意语法和逻辑连接，使表达更自然。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to practice English regularly because I have a test next month and want to improve my skills.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但有重复词汇和小语法错误。建议注意避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并适当使用连接词。

例: Usually, I write notes on my calendar and highlight important dates or tasks. This helps me remember important things effectively.

× Actually I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I will forget what the next steps I need to do and I will forgot the process of the project.

✓ Actually I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I forget what the next steps I need to do and I forget the process of the project.

这里的错误是动词时态使用不当。'will forgot'是不正确的，应该用一般现在时或一般过去时。因为描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时 'forget'。建议去掉 'will'，直接用 'forget'。

× So I think that I'm not good at memories things.

✓ So I think that I'm not good at memorizing things.

这里 'memories' 是名词，应该用动名词形式 'memorizing' 来表示记忆的动作。错误地使用了名词形式，导致语法错误。

× When I was 13 years old, I forgot to attend to the school to take my progress test, which was very stressful for me because the test was very important for my parent, to my parents and I really feel disappointed since I affect their experience.

✓ When I was 13 years old, I forgot to attend school to take my progress test, which was very stressful for me because the test was very important to my parents, and I really felt disappointed since I affected their expectations.

1. 'attend to the school' 中 'attend' 不需要 'to'，正确用法是 'attend school'。2. 'important for my parent' 应为复数 'parents'，且介词应为 'important to my parents'。3. 'I really feel disappointed' 时态应与过去事件一致，改为 'I really felt disappointed'。4. 'since I affect their experience' 语义不清，改为 'since I affected their expectations' 更合适。

× I think the things that I have to remember in my daily life is remember to do the practice on the English.

✓ I think the things that I have to remember in my daily life is to remember to practice English.

1. 'do the practice on the English' 结构不正确，应该用 'practice English'。2. 'remember to do the practice' 应改为 'remember to practice'，更自然。

× It's quite important for me 'cause I need to improve my English skills and having a test next month, so it's quite things I need to.

✓ It's quite important for me because I need to improve my English skills and I have a test next month, so these are quite important things I need to do.

1. 'having a test next month' 应改为 'I have a test next month'，保持句子完整。2. 'so it's quite things I need to' 结构不完整，改为 'so these are quite important things I need to do'。3. 使用完整连词 'because' 替代口语缩写 'cause'。

× Usually I would take take down the notes on my calendars and I will like highlight the important date or the important things that I have to do.

✓ Usually I would take down notes on my calendar and I would like to highlight the important dates or important things that I have to do.

1. 'take take' 是重复错误，应为 'take'。2. 'notes on my calendars' 中 'calendars' 应为单数 'calendar'，且 'on' 可保留。3. 'I will like highlight' 语法错误，应为 'I would like to highlight'。4. 'important date' 应为复数 'important dates'。