Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议练习使用简单且正确的句型，避免重复和语法错误。可以先用一句话直接回答问题，再用一两个具体例子支持。

例: No, I wouldn't say I'm good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or the names of people I just met.

提案: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，先直接回答问题，再说明原因或结果。

例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt very sorry and apologized to her, promising not to forget it again.

提案: 回答中有很多犹豫词和重复，句子不够连贯。建议减少填充词，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并且句子结构更完整。

例: As a student, I need to remember my class schedule and the homework I have to complete each day.

提案: 回答中语法错误和词汇使用不当影响表达。建议使用正确的动词形式和词汇，句子结构清晰，表达具体方法。

例: Since I'm not good at remembering things, I often use technology like setting alarms or taking notes to help me remember important tasks.

× No I'm wouldn't to say I'm good at memorizing things and I often forget my keys on my phone also and didn't umm to remember the face and name.

✓ No, I wouldn't say I'm good at memorizing things. I often forget my keys and my phone, and I don't remember faces and names.

错误在于“I'm wouldn't to say”中“wouldn't”用法错误，应该用“wouldn't say”表示否定的意愿。还有“didn't umm to remember”结构不正确，应该用“don't remember”。建议学习情态动词的正确用法和否定形式。

× Yes I've forgiven my best friend birthday and I felt very sorry and I have make sure I'm apologize to her and say I wouldn't forget that again.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten my best friend's birthday and I felt very sorry. I made sure I apologized to her and said I wouldn't forget it again.

“forgiven”误用，应为“forgotten”表示忘记。动词时态混乱，如“have make sure”应为“made sure”，“I'm apologize”应为“apologized”。建议加强过去时和完成时的用法。

× No I'm wouldn't to say I'm good at memorizing things and I often forget my keys on my phone also and didn't umm to remember the face and name.

✓ No, I wouldn't say I'm good at memorizing things. I often forget my keys and my phone, and I don't remember faces and names.

“forget my keys on my phone”中“on”用法错误，应直接并列“forget my keys and my phone”。建议注意介词的正确搭配。

× Yes I've forgiven my best friend birthday and I felt very sorry and I have make sure I'm apologize to her and say I wouldn't forget that again.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten my best friend's birthday and I felt very sorry. I made sure I apologized to her and said I wouldn't forget it again.

“my best friend birthday”缺少所有格，应为“my best friend's birthday”。“say I wouldn't forget that again”中“that”指代不明确，改为“it”更合适。建议注意代词和所有格的正确使用。

× Umm because I am a student so I need to remember a lot what's the umm what time I should take a class or do something umm and some is like just what the homework like today.

✓ Umm, because I am a student, I need to remember a lot, like what time I should attend class or do something, and also what homework I have today.

“some is like just what the homework like today”结构混乱，时态和表达不清。应使用现在时态描述日常事实。建议理清句子结构，使用正确时态。

× Because I'm not good at remember things, so I often use technology to help me remember important thick life.

✓ Because I'm not good at remembering things, I often use technology to help me remember important things in life.

“not good at remember”中“remember”应使用动名词形式“remembering”。“thick life”应为“things in life”。建议掌握介词后动词的-ing形式用法。

× Set out the alarms or take a note to import to not take me to remember this.

✓ I set alarms or take notes to help me remember things.

“import to not take me to remember this”表达不清且用词错误，应简化为“help me remember things”。建议注意量词和表达的准确性。