Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，且表达不够自然。建议避免重复词汇，注意时态一致性，并且可以用更自然的表达方式描述记忆力不好。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, once I left my keys in a taxi because I forgot them. I think my memory isn't very reliable.

提案: 回答中时态错误，'haven't forget'应为'haven't forgotten'。建议注意时态的正确使用，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important. However, I often forget simple things like my bottle, pencil, pen, or eraser.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，且表达不完整。建议避免重复，使用完整句子，并且可以用连接词丰富内容。

例: I need to remember my daily timetable, including the times for breakfast, lunch, and dinner.

提案: 回答不完整且断句错误。建议使用完整句子，避免句子碎片，并且详细说明记忆方法。

例: I always write important things down and place the notes somewhere I can see them all the time, like on my desk or the fridge.

× One time I forget my key in the taxi.

✓ One time I forgot my key in the taxi.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式。forget的过去式是forgot。

× No, I haven't forget something important.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten something important.

现在完成时中，动词应使用过去分词形式。forget的过去分词是forgotten。

× I just forget some simple things like my bottle, my pencil, my pen or eraser.

✓ I just forget some simple things like my bottle, my pencil, my pen, or eraser.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，使用一般现在时forget是正确的，但句中缺少逗号分隔列举项，添加逗号使句子更清晰。

× I always write it down and put it in a. Where I can see it all the time.

✓ I always write it down and put it in a place where I can see it all the time.

句子断开成两个不完整的句子，应合并为一个完整句子，补充缺失的名词place。