Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容较为冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. Since primary school, I have been able to remember important information, which helped me achieve good results in exams and assignments.

提案: 回答内容具体，但表达不够流畅，有语法错误和重复词汇。建议使用更连贯的句子结构，并减少口语填充词。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once at work as a nurse, I forgot to give medication to a patient, but thankfully my colleague reminded me in time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: As a nurse, I need to remember many details about medications, such as their uses, side effects, and the correct times to administer them. Therefore, having a good memory is essential, and I also rely on tools like reminders to avoid forgetting important information.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且句子结构重复。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并举出具体例子。

例: I usually write important information in a notepad to help me remember. For instance, if a patient needs medication at specific times, I note it down to ensure I don't forget.

× I have to memorize a lots of drugs including what the usage, the side effects and even the time to minister them correctly.

✓ I have to memorize a lot of drugs including their usage, side effects, and even the time to administer them correctly.

“a lots of” 是错误的表达，正确的应该是 “a lot of”，表示大量的。并且“the usage”应改为“their usage”以指代前面的“drugs”。此外，“minister”应为“administer”，意思是给药。

× I have to not pay on the notes.

✓ I have to pay attention to the notes.

短语“pay on the notes”是不正确的，正确的表达是“pay attention to”，意思是注意。

× if someone tells me that a patient has to be administering drugs in for a certain time and period

✓ if someone tells me that a patient has to be administered drugs at a certain time and for a certain period

这里“has to be administering”用法错误，应该用被动语态“has to be administered”，表示病人需要被给予药物。

× I think memorizing about stuff can be one of my strengths.

✓ I think memorizing stuff can be one of my strengths.

“memorizing about stuff”中“about”是不必要的，动词“memorize”后直接跟宾语即可。

× one once forgot to administer medication to one of my patients.

✓ I once forgot to administer medication to one of my patients.

句子中“one once forgot”结构不正确，应改为“I once forgot”，主语应明确且一致。