Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi kurang terstruktur dan ada pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat pembuka yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, kemudian berikan alasan atau contoh secara singkat dan jelas tanpa mengulang kata-kata seperti 'I don't know'.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often find it hard to remember sequences. For instance, I struggle to recall the order of steps in a process.

提案: Jawaban Anda sudah menjawab pertanyaan dengan contoh, tetapi kalimatnya kurang natural dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih lancar.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot where I had put my keys, which caused me some trouble.

提案: Jawaban Anda agak membingungkan dan kurang terstruktur. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas, serta perhatikan penggunaan preposisi dan tata bahasa. Jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik apa yang Anda ingat dan bagaimana teknologi membantu Anda.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks, so I use digital tools like reminders and calendars to help me stay organized.

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan terdapat pengulangan kata serta kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menjawab dengan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide. Hindari penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'umm'.

例: To remember important things, I usually repeat them several times until they become familiar. For example, I repeat my partner's phone number aloud to memorize it.

× Yes, I've forgotten something important. For example, I have forgotten where was I put my keys.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten something important. For example, I have forgotten where I put my keys.

The sentence 'where was I put my keys' incorrectly uses the past tense auxiliary 'was' and the passive form 'put'. The correct form is 'where I put my keys' using the simple past tense without 'was'. This is because 'put' is the past tense of 'put' and the sentence is an indirect question, which does not invert the subject and verb.

× In my daily life, I need to remember about my To Do List my tasks for my work and it really helps for having a technology, especially a reminder and a calendar digitally.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my To Do List and my tasks for work, and technology really helps, especially digital reminders and calendars.

The phrase 'remember about' is incorrect; 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'helps for having a technology' is incorrect; it should be 'technology helps'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Umm, I think to always memorize important things. I will do a repetition, umm, and getting used to about it.

✓ Umm, I think I should always memorize important things. I will repeat them, umm, and get used to them.

The phrase 'I think to always memorize' is incorrect; 'think' is followed by a clause or gerund, not an infinitive here. 'Doing a repetition' is awkward; 'repeat' is better. 'Getting used to about it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'get used to them' without 'about'. The corrections improve verb forms and preposition usage.