Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“forget the things such as kids and cars”表达不清晰，且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确性。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget to bring my keys or wallet when I go out, so I usually use an app to remind me.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“had forgot”应为“had forgotten”，“apologize for him to get his forgive”表达不正确且不自然。建议学习正确的时态和固定搭配，表达时更简洁明了。

例: Yes, I once forgot my close friend's birthday. I apologized to him sincerely and promised to remember it next time.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误，如“a very useful tools”应为“a very useful tool”。建议简化句子结构，表达更具体明确。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks. I use a useful app to take notes and set reminders for important events.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“make him remind to me”不正确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主谓一致和固定搭配。

例: I remember important things by writing notes and setting reminders. Also, I tell my friends about these events so they can help remind me if I forget.

× I often forget the things such as kids and cars when I go out, so I usually use the app in order to remind it.

✓ I often forget things such as kids and cars when I go out, so I usually use an app to remind me.

这里“the things”用法不当，应该用复数形式“things”表示泛指；“the app”前缺少冠词，改为“an app”；“remind it”中“it”指代不明，应该用“remind me”表示提醒我。

× Yes, I had forgot my friend's birthday who was very close to me, so I tried to apologize for him to get his forgive.

✓ Yes, I forgot my friend's birthday who was very close to me, so I tried to apologize to him to get his forgiveness.

“had forgot”时态错误，正确用过去式“forgot”；“apologize for him”用法错误，应该是“apologize to him”；“get his forgive”中“forgive”应为名词“forgiveness”。

× It is a very useful tools that I can keep the things in note and it also can allow me when the things happen in current day.

✓ It is a very useful tool that I can use to keep things in notes and it also can remind me when things happen on the current day.

“tools”应为单数“tool”与前面的“a”呼应；“the things”应去掉“the”变为复数“things”；“keep the things in note”表达不准确，改为“keep things in notes”；“allow me”用词不当，改为“remind me”；“in current day”应为“on the current day”。

× Then I will tell friends that things happened in detail so as to make him remind to me.

✓ Then I will tell friends about the things that happened in detail so that they can remind me.

“make him remind to me”结构错误，应该用“they can remind me”；“tell friends that things happened”缺少介词“about”；“him”指代不明，改为复数“they”指代“friends”。