Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tapai ko uttar thulo ra thap vivaran haru sameteko cha, tara kehi vaakya haru dherai lamo ra thap shabda prayog gareko cha jun natural awaz ma thik hudaina. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra thap vivaran haru sametda linking words jastai 'because', 'so', 'therefore' ko prayog garna saknuhunchha. Yo le uttar lai sajilo ra prabhavshali banauchha.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I usually try to relate new information to something I already know because this helps me remember better. Therefore, I focus on understanding the context rather than just memorising facts.

提案: Tapai le prashna ko uttar sidha diye pani, vaakya haru thap spashtata ra sangati ko lagi linking words ko prayog garna saknuhunchha. Tapai le thap specific details jastai 'when', 'why' ra 'how' sametnu parcha jasle uttar lai adhik prabhavshali banaunchha.

例: Yes, just yesterday I forgot to reschedule a meeting with my boss because I was busy with other tasks. Fortunately, my friend reminded me later. Since then, I have been writing important things in my notepad to avoid forgetting.

提案: Tapai ko uttar thulo ra kehi shabda haru dohrayeko cha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra thap specific details jastai 'types of tasks' ra 'importance' sametnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'mainly', 'such as', 'for example' ko prayog garna saknuhunchha.

例: In my daily life, I mainly need to remember my work tasks, such as software engineering duties and regular communication with my boss. These tasks are important to complete by the end of each day.

提案: Tapai le uttar ma thap sangati ra linking words ko prayog garna saknuhunchha jastai 'because', 'so', 'therefore'. Tapai le thap specific details jastai 'which app' ra 'how it helps' sametnu parcha jasle uttar lai prabhavshali banaunchha.

例: I used to forget many important things, so my friend suggested using a notepad app. Therefore, I downloaded an app where I can write down tasks and set deadlines. This method helps me stay organized and remember important things easily.

× So what techniques I normally use is I need to relate my thing that I need to understand with some other kind of thing so that it will be memorizable.

✓ So the technique I normally use is relating the thing I need to understand with some other kind of thing so that it will be memorizable.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I need to relate' instead of the gerund form 'relating' after 'is'. In English, after 'is', a gerund (verb + -ing) is used to describe an action or technique. Therefore, 'relating' is correct here.

× So I need to understand a little bit more rather than just memorizing it.

✓ So I need to understand a little bit more rather than just memorize it.

After 'rather than', the base form of the verb is preferred instead of the gerund. So 'memorize' is correct instead of 'memorizing' in this context.

× I was kind of busy doing some other thing on that period so I needed to reschedule but I completely forgot that and my friend reminded me afterward.

✓ I was kind of busy doing some other things during that period so I needed to reschedule but I completely forgot that and my friend reminded me afterward.

The phrase 'some other thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be plural here to indicate multiple tasks or activities. Also, 'on that period' should be 'during that period' (preposition correction).

× I was kind of busy doing some other thing on that period so I needed to reschedule but I completely forgot that and my friend reminded me afterward.

✓ I was kind of busy doing some other things during that period so I needed to reschedule but I completely forgot that and my friend reminded me afterward.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'period'; the correct preposition is 'during' to indicate a time span.

× my friend suggested me to have it return on my notepad.

✓ my friend suggested that I use it on my notepad.

The verb 'suggest' is not followed by an object pronoun plus infinitive. Instead, it is followed by 'that' plus a clause with the subject and base verb. So 'suggested me to have it return' is incorrect; it should be 'suggested that I use it'.

× So I have downloaded it on my app.

✓ So I have downloaded it on my app.

This sentence is acceptable but 'on my app' is better expressed as 'in my app' because something is downloaded into an app, not on it.

× So I have downloaded it on my app.

✓ So I have downloaded it in my app.

The correct preposition to use with 'downloaded' and 'app' is 'in' because the content is stored inside the app.