Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主谓一致。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, once when my mom forgot the shopping list at the supermarket, I was able to remind her of the vegetables we needed to buy.

提案: 回答内容前后矛盾，表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，注意时态和句子完整性。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last weekend I had a test but I forgot to bring my student card, so I was not allowed to take the exam.

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，词汇使用重复且不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇，句子结构更完整，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to clean the house, wipe the desk with cleaning cloth, and take out the trash regularly.

提案: 语法错误影响表达清晰度，句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更简洁的表达方式。

例: I write important things in my notebook, so if I forget something, I can check it to remind myself.

× I remember one day my mom and me going to the supermarket but my mom forgot what items should we buy or what vegetables should we buy and I mentioned that.

✓ I remember one day my mom and I going to the supermarket but my mom forgot what items we should buy or what vegetables we should buy and I mentioned that.

这里“my mom and me”用作主语时应使用主格“I”，所以改为“my mom and I”。另外，间接疑问句中语序应为“we should buy”，而不是“should we buy”。

× Yeah, I've never forgotten something important.

✓ Yeah, I've never forgotten anything important.

这里用“never forgotten something”不太自然，通常用“never forgotten anything”表示否定含义。

× For example, one day at the weekend. So as these days I have a test, but I forgot to take my student card or passport, so I didn't write.

✓ For example, one day at the weekend, I had a test, but I forgot to take my student card or passport, so I didn't write it.

句子缺少谓语，需补充“had a test”。“didn't write”后应加宾语“it”以完整表达。

× So I need to remember clean the house and using the the wrap, cleaning wrap and cleaning the desk and grab the trash items.

✓ So I need to remember to clean the house, use the wrap, clean the desk, and take out the trash.

动词“remember”后应接不定式“to clean”，而不是动名词形式。句中“using the the wrap”重复且用法错误，应改为“use the wrap”。

× I will writing the important things that I should remember on the notebook so when I forgot I can open the notebook and see what I should remember.

✓ I will write the important things that I should remember in the notebook so when I forget, I can open the notebook and see what I should remember.

“will”后应接动词原形“write”，而不是“writing”。“on the notebook”应改为“in the notebook”，因为内容写在笔记本里。时态应统一，改“forgot”为“forget”。