Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları var ve cümle yapısı doğal değil. "memorize" fiilinin doğru hali "memorising" olmalı ve cümleniz daha akıcı olmalı. Ayrıca, cevabınızı desteklemek için kısa bir açıklama ekleyebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I often use techniques like repetition and association to help me remember information.

提案: Cümleniz dilbilgisi açısından hatalı ve anlamı net değil. Zaman uyumu ve kelime seçimine dikkat etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important when I was a child. For example, I was supposed to open the window, but I forgot to do it, and that day it was rainy.

提案: Cümlelerinizde zaman ve yapı hataları var. Ayrıca, cevabınızda daha spesifik detaylar vermeniz gerekiyor. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks, so I usually write notes or tell my friends to help me remember.

提案: Cevabınız açık ve anlaşılır, ancak daha çeşitli kelimeler kullanarak ve bağlaç ekleyerek daha etkili hale getirebilirsiniz.

例: I usually write notes to help me remember important things, and sometimes I set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

× Yes, I'm good at memorize things.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorising things.

After the phrase 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'memorize' should be 'memorising'.

× Yes, I have when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten when I was a child.

The sentence is missing the past participle verb 'forgotten' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× I must open the window but I'm forgetting so.

✓ I had to open the window but I forgot to do so.

'Must' is not used for past obligations; 'had to' is correct. Also, 'I'm forgetting so' is incorrect; 'forgot to do so' is the proper expression.

× This day is a rainy and.

✓ That day was rainy.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Rainy' is an adjective and should be used properly with a subject and verb. Also, 'this day' should be 'that day' to refer to a past event.

× I wrote the notes or I say to my friends. To remember it to me.

✓ I write notes or tell my friends to help me remember.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verb tenses. 'I wrote' should be 'I write' for habitual action, and 'say to my friends' should be 'tell my friends'. 'To remember it to me' is incorrect; it should be 'to help me remember'.