Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點重複且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用一兩句話說明原因，避免冗長和語法錯誤。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget important items like my keys during exams, which makes me feel frustrated.

提案: 回答內容不清楚且語法錯誤較多。建議你用更清楚的句子描述事件，並用連接詞使敘述更流暢。

例: Yes, once I forgot my keys and got locked out of my room. Because of that, I had to book a hotel for the night, which was very frustrating.

提案: 回答不夠清楚且有語法錯誤。建議你直接說明日常需要記得的事情，並用具體例子支持你的說法。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like my phone and wallet. For example, once I forgot my ID before an exam, which caused a lot of trouble.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不夠清楚。建議你用更自然的句子說明你如何利用手機應用程式幫助記憶。

例: I usually use apps on my iPhone to help me remember important things because I think my memory is not very good.

× Sometimes I really forget the stuff such as key and pan when I'm during my exam.

✓ Sometimes I really forget stuff such as keys and a pan when I'm during my exam.

The word 'stuff' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Key' and 'pan' should be pluralized to 'keys' and 'a pan' to match the context. In English, when referring to multiple items, plural forms are used. Also, 'a pan' is singular, so an article is needed.

× And yeah, I really forget a lot of thing.

✓ And yeah, I really forget a lot of things.

The phrase 'a lot of' should be followed by a plural noun when referring to countable items. 'Thing' should be pluralized to 'things' to be grammatically correct.

× It just kind of frustrated for me.

✓ It just kind of frustrates me.

The sentence lacks a proper verb form. 'Frustrated' is past tense or adjective, but here the present tense verb 'frustrates' is needed to express ongoing feeling. Also, 'for me' is less natural than 'me' in this context.

× So once I forget my kid and that was kinda depression things 'cause I get locked out my room and I can't get in.

✓ So once I forgot my key and that was kind of a depressing thing because I got locked out of my room and I couldn't get in.

The verb tense should be past tense 'forgot' to match the past event. 'Kid' is likely a typo for 'key'. 'Depression things' is incorrect; 'a depressing thing' is correct. 'Get locked out my room' should be 'got locked out of my room' with correct preposition and past tense. 'Can't' should be 'couldn't' for past inability.

× So basically I have to book a hotel so that maybe can pass the night.

✓ So basically I had to book a hotel so that I could pass the night.

The modal verbs should be in past tense to match the past event. 'Have to' becomes 'had to', and 'maybe can' is incorrect; 'I could' is appropriate here.

× Yeah, that was kinda frustrated for me.

✓ Yeah, that was kind of frustrating for me.

'Frustrated' is an adjective describing a feeling experienced by a person, but here the situation is causing frustration, so 'frustrating' is the correct adjective form.

× So as my experience, I think I really need to bring my kids or my parents because once I just turn my I just want to pass my exam.

✓ From my experience, I think I really need to bring my kids or my parents because once I just turned my... I just wanted to pass my exam.

'As my experience' is incorrect; 'From my experience' is the correct phrase. 'Turn my' is incomplete and unclear; 'turned my' is past tense. 'Want' should be past tense 'wanted' to match the past context.

× And I thought that was a digital exam, but actually it it isn't.

✓ And I thought that was a digital exam, but actually it isn't.

The repetition of 'it' is a mistake and should be removed. The tense is correct here.

× So basically I really need to a small thing just can change your life.

✓ So basically, I really need to remember that a small thing can change your life.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'need to'. Adding 'remember that' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'just can change' should be 'can change'.

× So I really need to remember the small thing.

✓ So I really need to remember the small things.

When referring to multiple unspecified small items, the plural 'things' is more appropriate than singular 'thing'.

× I usually go for digital tours, something like iPhone, iPhone there has a lot of apps in your phone so I just usually use them to help me remember.

✓ I usually use digital tools, like the iPhone. The iPhone has a lot of apps, so I usually use them to help me remember.

'Go for digital tours' is incorrect; 'use digital tools' is correct. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'iPhone there has' is ungrammatical; 'The iPhone has' is correct.

× I remember that thing 'cause my I thought my memorizing is really not good, so I just using the tour maybe.

✓ I remember that because I thought my memory is really not good, so I just use the tools maybe.

'My I thought' is incorrect; it should be 'I thought'. 'Memorizing' is a verb form; 'memory' is the noun needed here. 'Just using' should be 'just use' to match present tense.