Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and coherent by using linking words and clear structure. For example, start with a direct answer, then give specific examples with linking words.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget where I put my keys or phone, so I spend time looking for them.

提案: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and clear structure. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain why it was important.

例: Yes, I once lost my wallet at a modeling agency. It was very important because it contained my cards and money, which I needed urgently.

提案: Avoid refusing to answer questions. Try to respond directly with a simple answer and add some details to show your ability to communicate.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and important tasks, such as meetings or deadlines.

提案: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and incomplete. Use linking words and avoid repeating the same word. Provide a clear explanation of your method.

例: I use an alarm clock to remind me of important things because I don't like forgetting tasks. It helps me stay organized and on time.

× I always try to find out this and on this time where while I try to find my some things I will.

✓ I always try to find out this, and at this time, while I try to find some of my things, I will.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Try to find out this' is unclear and 'on this time where while' is incorrect preposition and conjunction usage. The correction uses proper verb forms and clearer prepositions to improve meaning and grammar.

× Yes, I did. I, I lost my wallet in modeling agency and I think it was really, it is really necessary thing because we have some really necessary information on it, for example our cards and money and.

✓ Yes, I did. I lost my wallet at a modeling agency and I think it was really important because it had some necessary information on it, for example, our cards and money.

The original sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly ('was really, it is really'). Also, 'in modeling agency' should be 'at a modeling agency' (preposition and article). The correction fixes tense consistency and article usage.

× I always try to find out this and on this time where while I try to find my some things I will.

✓ I always try to find this out, and at this time, while I try to find some of my things, I will.

The phrase 'my some things' is incorrect; it should be 'some of my things' to correctly use the pronoun with quantifier. Also, 'find out this' should be 'find this out' for correct verb phrase order.

× I lost my wallet in modeling agency

✓ I lost my wallet at a modeling agency

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is used to indicate a specific location or place. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'modeling agency'.

× I always Remember Me this clock and.

✓ I always remember this clock.

The reflexive pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used here. The verb 'remember' does not require a reflexive pronoun. Also, capitalization of 'Remember' is incorrect in the middle of a sentence.