Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and using clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I am generally good at memorising things; however, I can be forgetful at times, which means I occasionally struggle to recall certain details.

提案: Your answer contains grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Use the correct tense and structure, and provide more specific examples to make your answer clearer and more natural.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important items before, such as my phone and glasses, which caused me inconvenience during the day.

提案: Your answer has some word order issues and unclear phrases. Make sure to organise your sentences properly and explain your ideas clearly. Also, use linking words to connect your points.

例: I need to remember my daily tasks and schedule, and I also try to cherish meaningful moments with my family and friends.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I usually use my phone to write important notes and set reminders on my calendar, so I don't forget important tasks.

× Yes, I have been forgotten something important in my life, for example my phone and my glasses.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important in my life, for example my phone and my glasses.

The phrase 'have been forgotten' incorrectly uses the passive form. The correct form is the present perfect active 'have forgotten' because the subject 'I' is performing the action of forgetting.

× I need to remember important my daily tasks and schedule, and sometimes I remember meaning moments with my family and friends.

✓ I need to remember my important daily tasks and schedule, and sometimes I remember meaningful moments with my family and friends.

The adjective 'important' should come before the noun phrase 'my daily tasks and schedule' to maintain correct word order. Also, 'meaning moments' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'meaningful' to describe moments that have significance.

× Mostly I use my phone to write them down in my notes and I set remind on calendar so I don't forget it.

✓ Mostly I use my phone to write them down in my notes and I set reminders on the calendar so I don't forget them.

The verb 'set remind' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'reminders'. Also, 'on calendar' should be 'on the calendar' to include the definite article. Finally, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'reminders'.