Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“send myself quite good”应为“consider myself quite good”，“reputation”和“assassination”应为“repetition”和“association”。建议加强基础词汇和语法的准确性，同时避免重复使用“uh”等填充词。

例: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things. For example, when studying for exams, I use techniques like repetition and association, which help me recall information more effectively. This ability has always been beneficial for my studies.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，如“missing a delay”应为“missing a deadline”，“juggling well task”应为“juggling many tasks”。建议练习句子结构和词汇搭配，表达要清晰准确。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as missing a deadline for a school project. This happened because I was juggling many tasks and didn't manage my time well. Since then, I have started using reminders and planners to organize my work and avoid similar mistakes.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“stay the organized”应为“stay organized”，“keeps To Do List”应为“keeping a To-Do List”，“maintains a health”表达不完整。建议注意句子完整性和正确的词形变化。

例: In daily life, it is important to stay organized and manage time effectively. For example, keeping a To-Do List helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities. Additionally, maintaining good health is also essential.

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇和表达不清晰，如“writing them down in A and or”不完整，“this this mission”应为“this method”，“allowed or associated”表达不明确。建议练习表达的连贯性和准确性。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a notebook or using digital apps on my phone. This method helps me organize my tasks and set reminders so I don't forget deadlines or opportunities. Additionally, I repeat the information aloud or associate it with something familiar.

× I, I can send myself quite good and memorizing things.

✓ I can consider myself quite good at memorizing things.

这里'send myself quite good'用法错误，应该用'regard/consider myself good at'来表达自我评价。'and memorizing things'应改为' at memorizing things'，因为动词后接动名词时需要介词'at'。

× For example, when studying for exam, I use technique like reputation and uh, assassination, which help me return information more effectively and this ability has always been beneficial.

✓ For example, when studying for an exam, I use techniques like repetition and association, which help me retain information more effectively, and this ability has always been beneficial.

'technique'应为复数'techniques'，因为后面列举了多个方法。'reputation'和'assassination'是错误单词，应为'repetition'（重复）和'association'（联想）。'return information'应为'retain information'（保持信息）。缺少冠词'an'在'exam'前。

× Yes, I I've forgotten something important before such as missing a delay for a school project.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten something important before, such as missing a deadline for a school project.

'missing a delay'用法错误，应为'missing a deadline'（错过截止日期）。'I I've'重复，应删去多余的'I'。

× This happened because I was juggling well task and I didn't match my time well.

✓ This happened because I was juggling many tasks and I didn't manage my time well.

'well task'应为复数形式'many tasks'，表示多个任务。'match my time'用法错误，应为'manage my time'（管理时间）。

× Since then I have started years on reminders and players to study, organize it and avoid similar.

✓ Since then, I have started using reminders and planners to study, organize, and avoid similar mistakes.

'started years on'无意义，应为'started using'。'players'应为'planners'（计划本）。'organize it'中的'it'不明确，应去掉。

× In daily life, it is important to remember to stay the organized and manage time effectively.

✓ In daily life, it is important to stay organized and manage time effectively.

'remember to stay the organized'结构错误，应为'stay organized'。去掉多余的'the'。

× For example, keeping To Do List helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

✓ For example, keeping a To-Do List helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

'To Do List'前缺少冠词'a'，且应加连字符'To-Do List'。

× Additionally, maintains a health.

✓ Additionally, maintaining good health is important.

句子缺主语，'maintains a health'结构错误，应改为'maintaining good health'并补充谓语。

× I I usually remember important things by writing them down in A and or using digital apps on my phone.

✓ I usually remember important things by writing them down and/or using digital apps on my phone.

'in A and or'结构错误，应为'and/or'。去掉多余的'I'。

× This this mission helps me organize my task and set reminders so I don't forget the deadline or opportunities.

✓ This method helps me organize my tasks and set reminders so I don't forget deadlines or opportunities.

'mission'应为'method'。'task'应为复数'tasks'。'deadline'应为复数'deadlines'。去掉重复的'this'。

× Additionally, I'm repeating the information allowed or associated.

✓ Additionally, I'm repeating the information aloud or associating it.

'allowed'应为'aloud'（大声地）。'associated'应为'associating'，表示联想。