Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够流畅，有语法错误且表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免使用口头语“Umm”，并且注意语法正确。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget when I have too many tasks to handle.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的语法，并且提供具体例子或解释。

例: Yes, sometimes I forget important things, but I try to pay extra attention to them so I don't miss anything important.

提案: 表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to go to bed earlier because I usually stay up late, which makes me tired the next day.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但有过多的口头语“uh”，影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的表达。

例: I usually set alarms on my smartphone to remind me of important tasks, so I don't forget them.

× Action. Not even I have a poor memory, but for the important things I always pay more attention on them so I can inform myself every time.

✓ Actually, I don't have a poor memory, but for important things, I always pay more attention to them so I can remind myself every time.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。'Action'用法错误，应为'Actually'表示实际上。'Not even I have a poor memory'语序错误，应为'I don't have a poor memory'。'pay more attention on'应为'pay more attention to'。'inform myself'用词不当，应为'remind myself'。建议调整句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

× Well, in my TV life the things I need to remember is to sleep earlier because I'm a heavy night bird, I often sleep very late and it makes me tired the other day so.

✓ Well, in my daily life, the things I need to remember are to sleep earlier because I'm a night owl. I often sleep very late and it makes me tired the next day.

'the things'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是'is'。'TV life'应为'daily life'更符合语境。'heavy night bird'表达不准确，常用表达是'night owl'。'the other day'应为'the next day'表示第二天。建议注意主谓一致和固定搭配的使用。

× I usually set alarm for some important things on my smartphone. So, uh, when the things need, uh, is near to happen, uh, my, my phone can give me the information and keep, uh, keeps me in mind of the tasks.

✓ I usually set alarms for some important things on my smartphone. So, when the things are about to happen, my phone can give me the information and keep me in mind of the tasks.

'set alarm for'应为'set alarms for'，复数形式更合适。'when the things need, is near to happen'表达不正确，应为'when the things are about to happen'。'keep me in mind'用法错误，正确表达应为'remind me'。建议注意介词搭配和固定表达的正确使用。