Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，增强语言的自然流畅性。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often review what I did today and plan for tomorrow to avoid repeating mistakes.

提案: 回答较为完整，但表达略显简单，建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意语法细节，如冠词和复数形式。

例: I usually don't forget important things because I make a schedule the day before and set alarms to remind me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the time to go to the laboratory. I usually attend a conference in the morning and conduct experiments with my students in the afternoon.

提案: 表达不够清晰，存在词汇使用错误（如'pants'应为'pens'），建议加强词汇准确性和句子逻辑性。

例: I always make memos on my phone or write tasks in a notebook using pens of different colors. This method helps me complete my work efficiently.

× I believe that. Memory could. Avoid making mistakes.

✓ I believe that memory could help avoid making mistakes.

原句断句不完整，导致句子结构混乱。应将分开的短句合并成完整句子，表达清晰。建议将断开的句子合并，形成完整的陈述句。

× I usually don't forget the important things because I can make a schedule the day before and mark the important things or make alarm to remind me.

✓ I usually don't forget important things because I can make a schedule the day before and mark important things or set an alarm to remind me.

“the important things”中的定冠词“the”使用不当，泛指时不需要定冠词；“make alarm”应为“set an alarm”，且缺少冠词。建议去掉不必要的定冠词，使用正确搭配。

× I need to remember the time when I go to the laboratory.

✓ I need to remember the time when I go to the laboratory.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× Here I should attend a conference in the morning and after lunch I should do some ex experiment with my students.

✓ Here I should attend a conference in the morning and after lunch I should do some experiments with my students.

“ex experiment”应为“experiments”，且“some”后应接复数名词。建议改正拼写错误并使用复数形式。

× I always make a memo on my phone or record the tasks in the notebook by pants of different colors.

✓ I always make a memo on my phone or record the tasks in the notebook by pens of different colors.

“pants”是“裤子”的意思，语境应为“pens（钢笔）”，属于量词使用错误。建议根据语境使用正确的名词。

× I believe that it could make me fulfill the works very well.

✓ I believe that it can help me complete the work very well.

“could”在此处表达能力不准确，应使用“can”；“fulfill the works”搭配不当，应为“complete the work”。建议使用正确的情态动词和搭配。