Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
It depends. When it comes to statistics or numbers, I'm especially good at memorizing these things. But when it comes to events or people, I am not that good at memorizing them. For instance, when I meet some people for the second time, I may not recognize their names, but I still remember their face.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Well to be honest I am really aware of forgetting things so I don't usually make those simple mistakes. But there's once I forgot an important appointment with a teacher and he was really mad and annoyed at me. He shouted at me so I never did it again.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
I'm currently a student, so the most significant things that I have to memorize is the knowledge I learned in class. They're especially useful for my exams and I have to remember them in order to handle all the past papers. The second thing I have to remember is some of the language skills, since I'm learning Spanish at the moment.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I usually remember important things by listing a memo or A to do list. I sometimes tell others that I have to do certain things and they can be my alarm and notice me when it comes to the date or they can remind me of the thing.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但部分句子较长且有重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
例: I am quite good at memorising numbers and statistics. However, I find it harder to remember people's names, even though I usually recall their faces. For example, I might meet someone twice but forget their name the second time.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容具体，但表达略显口语化且有语法错误。建议使用更正式的表达，注意时态和语法，同时增加连接词使叙述更连贯。
例: I usually try hard not to forget important things. However, once I missed an important appointment with my teacher, which made him very upset. After that experience, I became more careful to avoid such mistakes.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 88.0提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但部分句子语法不够准确。建议注意主谓一致和复数形式，同时适当使用连接词提升表达流畅度。
例: As a student, I need to remember the knowledge taught in class because it helps me prepare for exams. Additionally, I am learning Spanish, so I also focus on memorising language skills to improve my proficiency.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 82.0提案: 回答表达清晰，但部分用词和句式不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。
例: I usually remember important tasks by making a to-do list. Sometimes, I tell my friends about my plans, and they remind me when the time comes.
文法
× For instance, when I meet some people for the second time, I may not recognize their names, but I still remember their face.
✓ For instance, when I meet some people for the second time, I may not recognize their names, but I still remember their faces.
这里的face是指多个人的脸，应该用复数形式faces，表示多个脸部。
× But there's once I forgot an important appointment with a teacher and he was really mad and annoyed at me.
✓ But there was once I forgot an important appointment with a teacher and he was really mad and annoyed at me.
这里描述过去发生的事情，应该用过去时态，there's是there is的缩写，表示现在时，应该改为there was。
× I'm currently a student, so the most significant things that I have to memorize is the knowledge I learned in class.
✓ I'm currently a student, so the most significant things that I have to memorize are the knowledge I learned in class.
主语是复数things，谓语动词应该用复数形式are，而不是is。
× I usually remember important things by listing a memo or A to do list.
✓ I usually remember important things by listing a memo or a to-do list.
a to-do list前面缺少冠词a，且to do list应写作to-do list，表示待办事项清单。
× I sometimes tell others that I have to do certain things and they can be my alarm and notice me when it comes to the date or they can remind me of the thing.
✓ I sometimes tell others that I have to do certain things and they can be my alarm and notify me when it comes to the date or they can remind me of the thing.
notice me用法不当，应该用notify me，表示通知我。
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