Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法的な誤り（"memories"は不可算名詞のため"memory"が正しい）と自然な表現の不足があります。また、回答がやや冗長で、より簡潔に答えることが望ましいです。

例: Yes, I have a good memory and can remember many things easily.

提案: 回答は直接的で内容も明確ですが、"schedule list"より自然な表現は"schedule"や"planner"です。また、"something"の繰り返しを避け、より具体的な語彙を使うと良いでしょう。

例: I have never forgotten anything important because I always check my schedule carefully.

提案: "remember about conversation"は不自然な表現です。"remember conversations"や"keep in mind what my friends say"などが適切です。また、理由の説明は良いですが、より具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

例: I need to remember conversations with my friends because it helps me communicate smoothly and maintain good relationships.

提案: 文法的な誤り（"could forgot"は"could forget"または"might forget"が正しい）と冗長な表現があります。"schedule list"より自然な"schedule"や"planner"を使い、簡潔に答えることが望ましいです。

例: I write important things in my schedule and check it regularly so I don't forget anything important.

× Yes, I think that I can have a good memories to remember a lot of things.

✓ Yes, I think that I can have good memory to remember a lot of things.

The word 'memories' is plural, but in this context, 'memory' as an uncountable noun is more appropriate to express the ability to remember things. Using 'a good memories' is incorrect because 'a' is used with singular countable nouns, and 'memories' is plural. The correct phrase is 'good memory.'

× I always write and check my schedule list because I could forgot my schedule.

✓ I always write and check my schedule list because I could forget my schedule.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'could' (a modal verb), the base form of the verb should be used. Therefore, 'forgot' should be corrected to 'forget.'

× I always write and check my schedule list because I could forgot my schedule.

✓ I always write and check my schedule list because I could forget my schedule.

After modal verbs like 'could,' the base form of the verb should be used, not the past tense. 'Forgot' is past tense, so it should be 'forget.'

× I think that I have to remember about conversation with my friends because it can help me to communicate with others smoothly.

✓ I think that I have to remember conversations with my friends because it can help me communicate with others smoothly.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about.' Also, 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the general meaning. Additionally, 'help me to communicate' can be simplified to 'help me communicate.'

× I think that I can have a good memories to remember a lot of things.

✓ Yes, I think that I can have good memory to remember many things.

The phrase 'a lot of things' is acceptable, but 'many things' is more formal and appropriate here. Also, 'a good memories' is incorrect as explained before; 'good memory' is correct.