Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免重复表达，如“memorizing things”重复出现。可以简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising. As a foreign language major, I often need to remember vocabulary, grammar rules, and articles, which has helped me improve my memory skills.

提案: 注意时态和单复数的正确使用，如“forgot”应为“forgotten”，“mistakes”前应加冠词。回答中可增加具体例子，使内容更丰富。

例: I have never forgotten anything very important. For example, I always make sure to bring my passport when I travel, so I haven't missed any flights due to forgetting important documents.

提案: 注意主谓一致和名词复数形式，如“homeworks”应为“homework”。回答应更具体，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: As a student, I need to remember important things like lesson concepts, homework assignments, and exam dates to stay organized and prepared.

提案: 表达应更自然，避免重复“important things”。“memorandums”用词不当，可用“notes”或“reminders”。增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually use modern technology like my phone or iPad to help me remember important tasks. I write notes and set reminders to keep track of everything I need to do.

× I'm currently majoring in foreign language studies that we have to memorize a lot of vocabularies, grammars, and even the articles.

✓ I'm currently majoring in foreign language studies where we have to memorize a lot of vocabulary, grammar, and even articles.

“vocabularies”和“grammars”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应该用单数形式“vocabulary”和“grammar”。此外，“that”指代不当，应改为“where”表示地点或范围。

× I think I've never forgot something important in our daily life.

✓ I think I've never forgotten something important in our daily life.

“forgot”是过去式，和现在完成时“have”连用时应使用过去分词“forgotten”。

× But I've never made this kind of mistakes.

✓ But I've never made this kind of mistake.

“this kind of”后面应接不可数名词或单数名词，不能用复数“mistakes”，应改为单数“mistake”。

× For our students, I think the crucial things that we have to remember in our daily life is the concept of lessons or their homeworks and the date of exams.

✓ For us students, I think the crucial things that we have to remember in our daily life are the concepts of lessons or their homework and the dates of exams.

“homework”是不可数名词，不用复数形式“homeworks”；“things”是复数，谓语动词应用复数“are”；“concept”应用复数“concepts”与“things”对应；“date”应用复数“dates”与“exams”对应。

× I usually make use of those modern technologies like phone or iPad.

✓ I usually make use of modern technologies like phones or iPads.

“phone”和“iPad”应使用复数形式“phones”和“iPads”，且不需要指示代词“those”。