Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid unnecessary information like mentioning IQ, which is not directly relevant. Also, use correct prepositions and articles, and keep the answer concise and clear.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often use techniques like repetition and association to help me remember important information.

提案: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make the answer coherent.

例: Yes, I once lost an expensive voucher at a fair last month. Fortunately, I was able to recover it with the help of the police.

提案: Avoid repeating phrases like 'on daily basis' multiple times. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the types of exercises or diet.

例: I need to remember my daily schedule because I often change it to maintain a healthy diet and include various physical exercises like yoga and jogging.

提案: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: I usually write down important information on paper because it helps me remember things more effectively throughout the day.

× I am good in memorizing things because I have a good level of IQ.

✓ I am good at memorizing things because I have a good level of IQ.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. We say 'good at' when referring to skills or abilities.

× Then I remind all my things easily.

✓ Then I remember all my things easily.

The verb 'remind' is used when causing someone else to remember something. Here, the student means they recall things themselves, so 'remember' is the correct verb.

× Yes, I lost my expensive voucher in the fair.

✓ Yes, I lost my expensive voucher at the fair.

The preposition 'at' is used for specific events or places like 'the fair'. Also, the past tense 'lost' is correct here.

× It was a matter of last month when I lost it and at last I will able to find it with the help of police cops.

✓ It happened last month when I lost it, and I will be able to find it with the help of the police.

The phrase 'will able to' is incorrect; it should be 'will be able to'. Also, 'a matter of last month' is unnatural; 'happened last month' is better. 'Police cops' is redundant; 'police' suffices.

× I like to remember my schedule on daily basis because I change my schedule on daily basis for my healthy diet and in the schedule there are different type of physical exercise which I like to do.

✓ I like to remember my schedule on a daily basis because I change it daily for my healthy diet, and the schedule includes different types of physical exercises which I like to do.

The phrase 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be correct: 'on a daily basis'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types'. Also, 'physical exercise' should be plural 'physical exercises' when referring to multiple activities.

× I like to write information about my important thing on the paper because it is a very good way to remind our thing on daily basis.

✓ I like to write information about my important things on paper because it is a very good way to remember things daily.

'On the paper' is better as 'on paper' in general statements. 'Remind our thing' is incorrect; 'remember things' is correct. Also, 'important thing' should be plural 'important things' to match context.

× I like to write about information, my important thing, which is very helpful for me to remind things.

✓ I like to write information about my important things, which is very helpful for me to remember things.

'Remind things' is incorrect; 'remember things' is the correct phrase. Also, 'my important thing' should be plural 'my important things' to be consistent.