Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，且表达不够简洁。建议练习简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially when I am interested in the topic. However, if I am not interested, I find it harder to remember information.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用完整句子并加入连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Last year, I forgot my mother's birthday, which made me feel very regretful. She was disappointed, and I apologized to her. I will make sure not to forget it again.

提案: 回答内容较为丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议使用连接词分割句子，使表达更清晰。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember specific times, such as meetings, tests, my driver's license test, and appointments to hang out with friends.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有些犹豫词和重复。建议减少填充词，使用更准确的表达。

例: I remember important things by making a list on my phone. This helps me remember appointments with my teacher, meetings, and the time I need to wake up and leave.

× it depends on the con content that the thing that we need to remind

✓ it depends on the content of the things that we need to remember

这里's con content'是拼写错误，应为'content'；'the thing that we need to remind'中，'thing'应为复数'things'，且'remind'用法错误，应为'remember'。内容涉及单复数和词汇选择错误。

× I remember it very good.

✓ I remember it very well.

'good'是形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词'well'。这里是副词用法错误。

× sometimes I don't feel like, uh, have interest in anything

✓ sometimes I don't feel like I have interest in anything

缺少主语'I'，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语以保证句子完整。

× I last year I forgot my mother's birthday, which made me really grateful, regretful.

✓ Last year I forgot my mother's birthday, which made me really regretful.

'grateful'用法错误，应该是'regretful'表示后悔；句首多余的'I'应去掉。

× She was kind of disappointed and I I apologize to her, but I don't think that I will make.

✓ She was kind of disappointed and I apologized to her, but I don't think that I will make the same mistake again.

'I I apologize'重复，应为'I apologized'，时态应为过去时；'I will make'不完整，应补充完整表达。

× some specific time, like the time for meeting and the time for the test and for my test of driver license

✓ some specific times, like the time for meetings and the time for tests and for my driver's license test

'time'应为复数'times'，'meeting'和'test'应为复数形式，'driver license'应为所有格形式'driver's license'。

× the time I need to meet someone to hang out with my friends.

✓ the time I need to meet someone to hang out with my friends.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× putting a list on my phone.

✓ putting a list in my phone.

'putting a list on my phone'中，'on'应改为'in'，表示在手机内存储内容。

× I think that will remind me of important things like the appointment with teacher or the time for meeting or umm, the, the time that I need to get up and go.

✓ I think that will remind me of important things like the appointment with the teacher or the time for meetings or, umm, the time that I need to get up and go.

缺少定冠词'the'修饰'teacher'，'meeting'应为复数形式'meetings'。