Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中有重复和不自然的表达，如开头的“Things.”显得多余。建议直接回答问题，并使用更自然流畅的句子，同时避免冗长。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, when I was in junior high school, I struggled to remember facts in subjects like history and geography because there were so many details. Therefore, I had to spend extra time reviewing to keep the information in my mind.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“deadline for destination”和“struggling multiple task”。建议使用正确的短语和语法，并且句子结构更清晰。

例: Yes, I once missed an important deadline because I was handling multiple tasks at the same time and didn't manage my time well. Since then, I have started using reminders to stay organized and avoid such mistakes.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“For, for example”，且表达不够具体。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并提供更具体的细节。

例: In daily life, I need to remember to stay organized and manage my time well. For example, I prioritize my tasks to make sure I don't forget any important responsibilities.

提案: 回答中句子不完整，缺少部分内容，且表达不够流畅。建议完整表达方法，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down or using digital apps on my phone. This method helps me organize tasks and set reminders, so I don't forget deadlines or appointments.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important before such as missing a deadline for destination.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as missing a deadline for a destination.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“destination”是可数名词，表示一个具体的目的地，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。

× This happened because I was struggling multiple task at once and didn't manage my time effectively.

✓ This happened because I was struggling with multiple tasks at once and didn't manage my time effectively.

“task”应为复数形式“tasks”，因为表示多个任务；同时“struggling”后面需要介词“with”来连接宾语。

× Since then I have started using reminder to stay organised and awarded.

✓ Since then I have started using reminders to stay organised and aware.

“reminder”应为复数形式“reminders”，表示多条提醒；“awarded”用词错误，应为“aware”，表示保持警觉。

× For, for example, prioritise tasks to avoid forgotten important responsibilities.

✓ For example, prioritise tasks to avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

“forgotten”是过去分词，句中应使用动名词“forgetting”来表示避免做某事。

× As for me, I usually remember important things by writing them down or using digital apps on my This method helps me organize tasks and set reminders, ensure I don't forget deadlines or appointments.

✓ As for me, I usually remember important things by writing them down or using digital apps on my phone. This method helps me organize tasks and set reminders to ensure I don't forget deadlines or appointments.

原句缺少“phone”一词，导致句子不完整；另外，“ensure”前应加“to”表示目的。