Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain briefly with clear and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget easily. Therefore, I often have to remind myself to remember important tasks.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain the situation logically and express your feelings clearly.

例: Yes, recently I forgot my partner's birthday, which made her very angry. As a result, I felt quite lost and sad about forgetting such an important day.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is a bit repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to wake up early, but I often fail because I sleep deeply. Additionally, sometimes I forget to attend my tuition classes or coaching center.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains incomplete sentences and some grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I usually remember important things by saving them on my mobile phone. For instance, I write notes in my notepad app or set alarms to remind me of important tasks.

× That's why I need to sometime or sometime remember things.

✓ That's why I need to sometimes remember things.

The word 'sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some unspecified time', but here the correct adverb form is 'sometimes' meaning 'occasionally'. Also, 'need to' is followed by the base verb, so 'sometimes remember' is correct.

× Yes, recently I forgot my partner's birthday and then she got very angry and in this I got very much lost and sadness.

✓ Yes, recently I forgot my partner's birthday and then she got very angry and because of this I felt very lost and sad.

The phrase 'in this' is incorrect; 'because of this' is appropriate to show cause. 'Got very much lost and sadness' is incorrect; 'felt very lost and sad' correctly uses the past tense verb 'felt' and the adjective 'sad' instead of the noun 'sadness'.

× The main thing I want to remember that is to woke up early, but I can't woke up early because of my deep sleep.

✓ The main thing I want to remember is to wake up early, but I can't wake up early because of my deep sleep.

'To' is followed by the base form of the verb, so 'to woke up' is incorrect; it should be 'to wake up'. Similarly, 'can't' is followed by the base verb 'wake up', not 'woke up'.

× But sometime I also forget my tuition classes or my coaching center.

✓ But sometimes I also forget my tuition classes or my coaching center.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Modal verb usage is not directly involved here but the adverb form is important for correct meaning.

× Definitely I remem.

✓ Definitely, I remember.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a typo 'remem'. It should be 'Definitely, I remember.' to be a complete and correct sentence.

× I remember my things from my mobile phone because I saved the things that I want to remember in future.

✓ I remember things using my mobile phone because I save the things that I want to remember in the future.

The phrase 'remember my things from my mobile phone' is awkward; 'remember things using my mobile phone' is clearer. Also, 'saved' should be present tense 'save' to match 'want' and the phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future'.

× I wrote on that type of things in my notepad or set alarm for them.

✓ I write those types of things in my notepad or set alarms for them.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Wrote' should be 'write' to match the habitual action. 'That type of things' should be 'those types of things' for correct plural and demonstrative adjective. Also, 'set alarm' should be plural 'set alarms' to agree with 'things'.