Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短，缺乏具体细节和例子，表达不够自然。建议增加具体例子，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I consider myself good at memorizing. For example, I can easily remember people's names and important dates, which helps me in social situations.

提案: 回答直接但过于简短，缺少细节和连贯性。建议补充更多细节，如忘记的原因和感受。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once in primary school, I forgot to do my homework because I was distracted by playing outside, and I felt quite embarrassed when the teacher asked for it.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和逻辑有误，内容重复且缺乏连贯性。建议理清思路，使用连接词，表达更具体。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule, complete my homework on time, and sometimes I have to pick up packages for my family.

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误，表达含糊。建议使用更准确的表达，说明具体方法并使用连接词。

例: I usually write important things down in a notebook or set reminders on my phone. Also, I sometimes ask my friends to remind me if it's really important.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing and can remember something that others don't remember.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing and can remember things that others don't remember.

这里'something'用在可数名词前不合适，应该用复数形式'things'，因为指的是多件事物。

× 1st I need to remember what course I will take today, and I will remember the homework and I will remember to do something others like to pick up a package.

✓ First, I need to remember what course I will take today, and I will remember the homework, and I will remember to do things like picking up a package that others like.

句子结构混乱，'do something others like to pick up a package'表达不清晰，改为'做别人喜欢的事情，比如取包裹'更符合英语表达习惯。

× Maybe I will take them down or let other people to notice me to do that thing.

✓ Maybe I will write them down or let other people remind me to do that thing.

'take them down'用法不当，正确表达是'write them down'，且'let other people to notice me'中不应有'to'，应改为'let other people remind me'更自然。