Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm not good at memory”应为“I don't have a good memory”，并且“unconvenient”拼写错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和拼写。

例: To be honest, I don't have a good memory. I tend to forget things easily, which can be quite inconvenient in my daily life.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“As far as I concerned”应为“As far as I am concerned”，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，并直接回答问题。

例: As far as I am concerned, I can't recall forgetting anything important so far.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，如“as I was a student”应为“as I am a student”，句子较长且缺少连接词。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: As I am a student, I have many things to remember. For example, I need to study all day and remember which classes I have in the morning and afternoon.

提案: 回答较为自然，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。建议丰富句型，使用连接词。

例: I usually write important things down in my notebook or on my mobile phone. This way, if I forget, I can quickly check my notes and complete the tasks.

× Well, to be honest, I'm not good at memory.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory'是不可数名词，表达记忆能力时应使用动名词短语'memorising things'，更符合英语习惯。

× Things I will forget very easily and I think it's very unconvenient in my life.

✓ I forget things very easily and I think it's very inconvenient in my life.

原句中'convenient'拼写错误，应为'inconvenient'，且句子结构不完整，需调整为完整句子。

× As far as I concerned, I can't remember what I have forgotten, so I think I haven't forgotten any important things before.

✓ As far as I am concerned, I can't remember that I have forgotten anything important, so I think I haven't forgotten any important things before.

短语应为'As far as I am concerned'，缺少动词'am'，且表达更自然的方式是使用'can't remember that I have forgotten anything important'。

× I think there are many things for me to remember as I was a student so I need to study all the day and I must remember which class it is in the morning and in the afternoon.

✓ I think there are many things for me to remember as I am a student, so I need to study all day and I must remember which class I have in the morning and in the afternoon.

这里时态应保持现在时，因为学生身份是现在的状态；'all the day'应为'all day'；'which class it is'应改为'which class I have'，主语和动词一致。

× Well, actually I will note these important things in my notebook or on my mobile phone so that if I forget, I can see these notes immediately and do the things.

✓ Well, actually I will note these important things in my notebook or on my mobile phone so that if I forget, I can see these notes immediately and do these things.

'do the things'中的'the things'用法不当，应为'do these things'，指代前文提到的具体事项，更加准确。