Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「I usually write down things when I memorize」は不自然で、「I usually write things down to help me remember」のように言い換えると良いでしょう。また、名前を覚えるのに時間がかかる理由を具体的に説明すると、内容が豊かになります。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write things down to help me remember. For example, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I don't meet them often.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I usually forget my answer when I had test」は「I usually forget my answers during tests」に修正できます。また、理由や具体例を加えて内容を充実させると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, during exams, I sometimes forget my answers because I get nervous. Also, I tend to lose important items because I don't pay enough attention.

提案: 回答は主題に沿っていますが、文法と表現の改善が必要です。「schedule is necessary to remember」は不自然で、「I need to remember my schedule」が適切です。また、「or something」は曖昧なので具体的に言い換えましょう。

例: I need to remember my daily schedule because I write it down in my notebook. If I forget my schedule, I might miss important appointments or tasks.

提案: 回答は理解できますが、繰り返しや不自然な表現があります。「I usually write down important things and remember things」は冗長なので、「I usually write down important things to help me remember」と言い換えましょう。また、具体的な方法や効果を説明すると良いです。

例: I usually write down important things to help me remember them, and I review my notes every day. Also, I repeat the information aloud to reinforce my memory.

× I don't like memorizing things, so I usually write down things when I memorize and I take a lot of time to remember people's name, so I think it's difficult for me.

✓ I don't like memorizing things, so I usually write down things when I memorize and I take a lot of time to remember people's names, so I think it's difficult for me.

The word 'name' should be plural 'names' because it refers to multiple people. This is a singular and plural issue, but specifically here it relates to the noun form needing to be plural to match the context.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I have.

The sentence 'Yes, I had.' is incorrect because the question is about a past experience, and the correct response uses the present perfect tense 'I have' to indicate experience up to now.

× I usually forget my answer when I had test.

✓ I usually forget my answer when I have a test.

The verb tense should be present tense 'have' to match the habitual action 'usually forget'. 'Had test' is incorrect; it should be 'have a test'.

× In addition to I likely to lost my important things because I not look carefully in.

✓ In addition, I am likely to lose my important things because I do not look carefully.

The phrase 'In addition to' is incorrectly used; it should be 'In addition,'. 'Likely to lost' is incorrect; it should be 'likely to lose' (base form after 'to'). 'I not look carefully in' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I do not look carefully.' The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here.

× I think schedule is necessary to remember because I try to write down schedule in my notebook or something, but if I forget to remember schedule I can't do anything more.

✓ I think a schedule is necessary to remember because I try to write down the schedule in my notebook or something, but if I forget to remember the schedule, I can't do anything else.

The noun 'schedule' needs an article 'a' or 'the' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'anything more' is better expressed as 'anything else' in this context.

× I think schedule is necessary to remember because I try to write down schedule in my notebook or something, but if I forget to remember schedule I can't do anything more.

✓ I think a schedule is necessary to remember because I try to write down the schedule in my notebook or something, but if I forget to remember the schedule, I can't do anything else.

The preposition 'in' is correctly used here, but the sentence needs articles before 'schedule' to be correct.

× I usually write down important things and remember things, and I try to continue every day.

✓ I usually write down important things and remember them, and I try to continue every day.

The pronoun 'them' is needed to refer back to 'important things' to avoid repetition and make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Moreover, I often say these things myself.

✓ Moreover, I often say these things to myself.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' requires the preposition 'to' when used with 'say' to indicate the action is directed towards oneself.