Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“when I my past work experience”不完整且不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily recall the tasks I completed in my previous jobs because I pay close attention to details.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“he remind me”应为“he reminded me”。建议注意时态一致性和避免重复，同时使表达更简洁。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once completely forgot my best friend's birthday until she reminded me.

提案: 回答中有许多语气词和不连贯的表达，句子结构混乱。建议减少填充词，使用清晰的句子结构，并且更具体地说明记忆方法。

例: In my daily life, I usually write down important tasks in a notebook. This helps me remember deadlines and appointments effectively.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在重复和语气词过多的问题。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且可以补充更多细节。

例: I usually use the calendar app on my phone to remember important things. It sends me notifications and alarms so I don't forget any important tasks.

× For example, when I my past work experience I'm easy to remember every work or every task I have did before.

✓ For example, when I think about my past work experience, I'm able to remember every job or every task I have done before.

句子中缺少动词，且“work”应使用复数形式“jobs”或“tasks”，动词“did”应使用过去分词“done”。需要补充动词并调整名词单复数形式。

× For example, when I my past work experience I'm easy to remember every work or every task I have did before.

✓ For example, when I think about my past work experience, I'm able to remember every job or every task I have done before.

“have did”是错误的过去时态用法，正确形式应为“have done”，即现在完成时的过去分词形式。

× For example, when I my past work experience I'm easy to remember every work or every task I have did before.

✓ For example, when I think about my past work experience, I'm able to remember every job or every task I have done before.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整。需要添加动词“think about”使句子完整。

× For sure I I have forgotten something important.

✓ For sure, I have forgotten something important.

句子中重复了“I”，属于句子结构错误，应删除多余的“I”。

× For example my best friend birthday totally forget that until he remind me it's her birthday.

✓ For example, I totally forgot my best friend's birthday until he reminded me it was her birthday.

“forget”应使用过去式“forgot”，且“remind”应使用过去式“reminded”。“birthday”前应加所有格“friend's”。

× For example my best friend birthday totally forget that until he remind me it's her birthday.

✓ For example, I totally forgot my best friend's birthday until he reminded me it was her birthday.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态。

× For example my best friend birthday totally forget that until he remind me it's her birthday.

✓ For example, I totally forgot my best friend's birthday until he reminded me it was her birthday.

“it's her birthday”中“her”指代不清，应根据上下文确认性别或使用中性表达。

× So yeah. Actually I have similar experience before.

✓ So yeah. Actually, I have had a similar experience before.

“have similar experience”缺少冠词“a”，且描述过去经历应使用现在完成时“have had”。

× I would do take some note.

✓ I would take some notes.

“do take”用法不当，且“note”应使用复数“notes”。

× I would do take some note.

✓ I would take some notes.

“note”应使用复数形式“notes”，表示多条记录。

× For example, I prepare my own notebook or I remember right what the test day I should do, uh, by today.

✓ For example, I prepare my own notebook or I remember exactly what I should do on the test day, which is today.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性，需调整词序和表达使句子通顺。

× I remember right what the test day I should do, uh, by today.

✓ I remember exactly what I should do on the test day, which is today.

“by today”用法不当，应使用“on the test day”表示具体时间。

× So you will remind me and also you will pop up alarm to, uh, remind me about what is important thing I have to do.

✓ So it will remind me and also pop up an alarm to remind me about the important things I have to do.

“you”指代不明，应使用“it”指代手机应用；“alarm”前需加冠词“an”；“thing”应使用复数“things”。