Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且内容有些重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免语法错误，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I need to do. For example, I sometimes forget appointments with others.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“once forgotten”应为“once forgotten”。内容可以更具体，说明如何改进。

例: Yes, I once forgot an important date with my boyfriend because I was busy with many sports assignments. Since then, I have tried to manage my time better to avoid such mistakes.

提案: 回答较好，但时态使用不准确，应保持时态一致。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study tasks because staying organized helps me manage my time better. Also, I often check the weather to decide if I need to bring an umbrella, especially when the weather is unpredictable.

提案: 回答内容清晰，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。建议使用更连贯的句子。

例: I usually remember important things by using my phone. For example, I write down appointments in the Tasks app, which sends me reminders and helps me avoid forgetting them.

× I often forget what I supposed to do and I don't pay enough orientation yet.

✓ I often forget what I am supposed to do and I don't pay enough attention yet.

这里'supposed'缺少助动词'am'，且'orientation'用错，应该是'attention'。'orientation'指的是方向或培训，不符合语境。

× For example, I sometimes forget appointment with others.

✓ For example, I sometimes forget appointments with others.

'appointment'应使用复数形式'appointments'，因为这里指的是不止一次的约会。

× I once forgotten the important appointment with my boyfriend.

✓ I once forgot the important appointment with my boyfriend.

'forgotten'是过去分词，需用简单过去时'forgot'，因为句子描述过去发生的动作。

× So I will manage my time better.

✓ So I will manage my time better.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× In my daily life, I really needed to remember my study tasks because staying organized helped me manage my time better.

✓ In my daily life, I really need to remember my study tasks because staying organized helps me manage my time better.

此句描述的是日常习惯，应使用一般现在时，'needed'改为'need'，'helped'改为'helps'。

× Besides, I often need to check whether I need to bring my umbrella, especially when the weather is unpredictable.

✓ Besides, I often need to check whether I need to bring my umbrella, especially when the weather is unpredictable.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I usually remember important things by using phones.

✓ I usually remember important things by using my phone.

'phones'应为单数形式'my phone'，指的是自己的手机。

× For example, I write down important appointments in the Tasks app on my phone because it sends me reminders and which helps me avoid forgetting them.

✓ For example, I write down important appointments in the Tasks app on my phone because it sends me reminders which help me avoid forgetting them.

'and which helps'结构不正确，应去掉'and'，使'which help me avoid forgetting them'修饰前面的'reminders'。且'help'应与复数主语'reminders'一致用复数形式。