Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更直接地回应问题，避免冗长且不连贯的表达。可以先给出总体评价，再用具体例子支持。同时，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: I think I am fairly good at memorising things, especially experiences like trips. For instance, I remember many details from a trip to Hainan with my parents, but I find it harder to remember information from books.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，且表达不连贯。建议用简单明了的句子描述忘记的重要事情，并说明后果。

例: Yes, I once forgot to go to a garden with my friends, which made them upset because the garden was very beautiful and clean.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议先列出需要记住的具体事项，再说明如何帮助记忆。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my homework and important things like drinking milk and taking medicine. To help me remember, I make notes on my desk.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有待提高。建议用更自然的表达方式描述记忆方法，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I use sticky notes on my desk to remember important tasks. I also use different colors, like red for essential things, so I can easily see what I need to do.

× my parents took me to the trip in Hainan

✓ my parents took me on the trip to Hainan

介词使用错误，应该用 'on the trip' 表示参加旅行，'to Hainan' 表示目的地。

× the gardens have very beautiful hygiene

✓ the garden has very good hygiene

garden 是单数，动词应用单数形式 has；hygiene 是不可数名词，前面不加 very beautiful，应改为 very good。

× But I forgot these things and he gets mad.

✓ But I forgot these things and he got mad.

时态不一致，前句是过去时，后句也应使用过去时 got；he 指代不明确，假设指朋友。

× I should need some homework and some essential things such as I need drink milk or I need take some medicine

✓ I need to do some homework and some essential things such as drinking milk or taking some medicine

should need 用法错误，表达需要直接用 need；动词后缺少不定式 to 或动名词形式。

× I need drink milk or I need take some medicine

✓ I need to drink milk or take some medicine

动词 need 后应接不定式 to do sth，而不是直接接动词原形。

× I will make tips in my table so I can remember it very clearly.

✓ I will make tips on my table so I can remember them very clearly.

介词错误，应该用 on my table；tips 是复数，指代时用 them。

× I will make some tips in my table so I can see what I should do very clearly and I will use different colors tips.

✓ I will make some tips on my table so I can see what I should do very clearly and I will use tips of different colors.

介词应为 on；形容词修饰名词顺序错误，应为 'tips of different colors'。

× If something essential I will use red tips.

✓ If something is essential, I will use red tips.

缺少系动词 is；条件句应完整表达。