Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "helped me understanding" nên là "helped me understand". Ngoài ra, câu cuối "memorizing links come naturally" không rõ nghĩa và nên sửa để rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think I have a good short-term memory. For instance, when I was at school, I could quickly recall information taught by the teacher, which helped me understand new topics faster and perform well in exams. Moreover, I find memorizing easier when I study with focus and interest. Therefore, memorizing has always been a natural skill for me.

提案: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "information things" thành "important information" và "repair carefully" thành "prepare carefully". Sử dụng từ nối như "because" để liên kết ý tốt hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important information a few times, especially when I feel very nervous. For example, during speeches or presentations in front of many people, I sometimes go blank even though I prepare carefully. This usually happens because I get anxious and lose my concentration.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm từ nối như "for example" hoặc "also" để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như "remember" nhiều lần bằng cách dùng từ đồng nghĩa.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. For example, I review lessons I have learned in class because it helps me retain information better. I also try to recall key poems quickly to prepare for exams. Moreover, I have to be careful not to leave the kitchen while cooking to avoid accidents.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ "drag them down" nên là "write them down". Câu "What I need to remember is something important" không cần thiết và gây lặp lại. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu.

例: To remember important things, I usually start by identifying key points and writing them down in my notebook. Then, I review my notes the next day, which helps me memorize the information better. This process also helps me create long-term memories. I find this method very effective.

× which helped me understanding new topics faster and perform well in exam

✓ which helped me understand new topics faster and perform well in exams

The verb 'helped' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'understand' instead of the '-ing' form 'understanding'. Also, 'exam' should be pluralized to 'exams' to match the context of multiple tests. This is a case of incorrect verb form and singular/plural issue.

× memorizing links come naturally to me especially when I'm studying in heart

✓ memorizing things comes naturally to me especially when I'm studying hard

The phrase 'memorizing links' is likely a mistake; 'links' should be 'things' or 'items'. Also, 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with the singular subject 'memorizing things'. 'Studying in heart' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'studying hard'. This involves singular/plural agreement and incorrect phrase usage.

× I've forgotten some information things a few times

✓ I've forgotten some information a few times

The phrase 'information things' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be combined with 'things'. The correct phrase is simply 'some information'. This is a singular/plural and noun usage issue.

× even though I repair carefully

✓ even though I prepare carefully

The word 'repair' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'prepare'. This is a modal verb usage or word choice error.

× there are a number of things I have to remember every day, such as the lessons I have learned in class because reviewing them helps me retain information better

✓ there are a number of things I have to remember every day, such as the lessons I have learned in class because reviewing them helps me retain information better

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I often try to recall key poems quickly to prepare for exams

✓ I often try to recall key points quickly to prepare for exams

The word 'poems' seems out of context; likely the intended word is 'points'. This is a vocabulary choice issue rather than grammar, but correcting it improves clarity.

× not to leave the kitchen while cooking to avoid accidents

✓ not to leave the kitchen while cooking to avoid accidents

No correction needed; the preposition usage is correct.

× What I need to remember is something important

✓ What I need to remember is something important

No correction needed; sentence structure is correct.

× then drag them down in my notebook

✓ then write them down in my notebook

The phrase 'drag them down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write them down'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb phrase.

× After that I'll review the notes the next day and it helped me to memorize the information better

✓ After that I'll review the notes the next day and it helps me to memorize the information better

The sentence mixes future tense 'I'll review' with past tense 'helped'. To maintain tense consistency, 'helped' should be 'helps'. This is a tense issue.

× Also create a long term memory of this and I think it is very effective way to do it

✓ Also, it creates a long-term memory of this, and I think it is a very effective way to do it

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper punctuation. Adding 'it' as the subject and commas improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'long term' should be hyphenated as 'long-term'. This is a sentence structure and article usage issue.