Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“always forgot”应为“always forget”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: Not really. I often forget important things in my daily life, like leaving my bag at home or other similar items.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且有重复和停顿。建议简洁明了地叙述经历，注意时态和句子结构。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring my lunch to school when I was in middle school, so I had to wait for my parents to bring it to me.

提案: 回答中表达不够流畅，有语法和结构问题。建议分清主次，使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: I need to remember many things daily, such as my bag and ID card, as well as new vocabulary in English and Spanish.

提案: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达。

例: I usually write important things down on paper. This way, if I forget, I can check my notes and remember them.

× Not actually because I always forgot a lot of important things in my daily life, such as forgot bringing my case when I left home and some other things like that.

✓ Not actually because I always forget a lot of important things in my daily life, such as forgetting to bring my case when I leave home and some other things like that.

这里的时间是现在的习惯动作，应该用一般现在时forget而不是过去时forgot；另外，forgot后面接动名词形式forgetting，表示动作的持续或习惯。

× Yeah, definitely. And that question reminds me about one, uh, experience, uh, when I'm in the middle school and I forgot to bring my kids when I come, when I left home and I had to waiting my parents returning back to home.

✓ Yeah, definitely. And that question reminds me about one experience when I was in middle school and I forgot to bring my kids when I left home and I had to wait for my parents to return home.

这里描述过去的经历，应该用过去时was而不是现在时am；动词短语had to后面接动词原形wait而不是waiting；短语returning back重复，应该用return；介词用法也需调整为wait for和return home。

× I think I need to remember a lot of things, not only some important things such as the case or the ID card I need what is that I need to bring every day, but also some English words or Spanish words.

✓ I think I need to remember a lot of things, not only some important things such as my case or ID card that I need to bring every day, but also some English words or Spanish words.

这里the case和the ID card前缺少所有格my，表示“我的”；句子结构混乱，需调整为that引导的定语从句，明确修饰前面的名词。

× I also remember important things by taking notes such as writing them down on the paper because I think this can help me to remind the important things.

✓ I also remember important things by taking notes, such as writing them down on paper, because I think this can help me remember important things.

on the paper中the不必要，通常说on paper；help me to remind应改为help me remember，remind后面应接人而非事物。

× When I for forget it and I can check the paper then I can memorize that.

✓ When I forget it, I can check the paper and then I can memorize it.

for forget是不正确的表达，应为forget；句子时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时；代词that改为it，更符合指代习惯。