Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
I'm not actually. I think I'm a person who who is not good at memory things. For example, in the primary school, I was always asked to memory a lot of long passages and I think I always not can't focus on memorizing things.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yeah, and that question reminds me when I was in middle school, once, once time when I get back from my school and return home, I realized that I forgot my I forgot bring my keys. And yeah, this is an important thing.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Well, I think I need to remember a lot of things, not only the some important things just like the case or other things I said before and but also some things in my studies about my studies such as Spanish words or English.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I think a good way to remember the important things is to take notes and write them down on a paper or a notebook. Because when you forgot some important things, you can you can form this paper and saw the important things you write.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇，如'memorise'而非'memory things'。同时，回答应更直接，避免冗长。
例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was in primary school, I often had to memorise long passages, but I found it difficult to focus and remember them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
例: Yes, I have. For example, when I was in middle school, I once forgot to bring my keys home after school, which was very important.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议简化表达，明确列举需要记住的具体内容，并使用连接词提高连贯性。
例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as important items like my keys and also study-related things like Spanish and English vocabulary.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: I usually remember important things by taking notes and writing them down in a notebook. This way, if I forget something, I can check my notes to remind myself.
文法
× I think I'm a person who who is not good at memory things.
✓ I think I'm a person who is not good at memorizing things.
这里'memory things'用法错误，'memory'是名词，不能直接修饰复数名词'things'，应使用动名词'memorizing'表示记忆的动作。
× in the primary school, I was always asked to memory a lot of long passages
✓ in primary school, I was always asked to memorize a lot of long passages
'memory'是名词，句中应使用动词不定式'memorize'表示记忆动作。
× I think I always not can't focus on memorizing things.
✓ I think I always can't focus on memorizing things.
句中出现双重否定'not can't'，英语中双重否定通常表示肯定，应去掉'not'。
× once time when I get back from my school and return home, I realized that I forgot my I forgot bring my keys.
✓ once when I got back from school and returned home, I realized that I forgot to bring my keys.
描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态；'forgot bring'应改为'forgot to bring'，不定式用法。
× not only the some important things just like the case or other things I said before and but also some things in my studies about my studies such as Spanish words or English.
✓ not only some important things like the case or other things I mentioned before, but also some things in my studies such as Spanish words or English.
'the some'用法错误，应去掉定冠词'the'；句子结构混乱，调整使表达更清晰。
× you can you can form this paper and saw the important things you write.
✓ you can refer to this paper and see the important things you wrote.
'form this paper'用法错误，应为'refer to this paper'；'saw'是过去式，句中应使用动词原形或适当时态；'write'应改为过去式'wrote'。
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