Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: I have been studying arts since junior school, so I have some ability to memorize things. However, I don't consider myself very good at memorizing complex information quickly.

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和用词不准确。建议注意时态和单词拼写，并用更具体的例子丰富内容。

例: Yes, I sometimes forget important things. For example, I once forgot the password to an app and the time of a small test, but I always remember the dates of major exams.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，使用连接词使内容连贯，并具体说明需要记住的内容。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the knowledge I learn in class. Also, I have to keep track of my weekly schedule, like which classes I have from Monday to Friday.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并说明具体方法和原因。

例: Sometimes I try to remember important things in my mind, but I find it more effective to write them down in a notebook or a To-Do list to remind myself.

× Maybe us a student majoring in arts subjects since Junior School.

✓ Maybe I am a student majoring in arts subjects since Junior School.

句中“us”是复数代词，主语应为第一人称单数“I”，因此应改为“I”。

× For instance, I would forgot the code to an app or a test time in my daily studies, but I wouldn't forget the important exam time.

✓ For instance, I would forget the code to an app or a test time in my daily studies, but I wouldn't forget the important exam time.

“forgot”是动词的过去式，句中使用“would”后应接动词原形，故应改为“forget”。

× I had to I have to remember the schedule in my in at school, such as which class to take from Monday to Friday.

✓ I have to remember the schedule at school, such as which class to take from Monday to Friday.

“in my in at school”中介词重复且错误，应使用“at school”表示在学校。

× Sometime I just remember it in my mind, but actually it would be a good way to remember them.

✓ Sometimes I just remember it in my mind, but actually it would be a good way to remember them.

“Sometime”应为副词复数形式“Sometimes”，表示“有时”。

× So sometimes I write them down on the notebook or To Do List books to remind me the important things.

✓ So sometimes I write them down in a notebook or To Do List book to remind me of the important things.

“on the notebook”应改为“in a notebook”，且“To Do List books”应为单数形式“book”，同时“remind me the important things”应加介词“of”。