Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”和“poor memories”用法不当，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子简洁，避免重复。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially long phone numbers, because they are too long and confusing for me.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“forgot”应为“forget”。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often forget important things because of my poor memory. For example, last month I forgot an important appointment for a physical examination with my doctor.

提案: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，如“some. Necessary delay things”和“turn on, turn off the light before”。建议使用完整句子，明确表达具体内容。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments and to do necessary tasks, such as turning the lights on or off before leaving the room.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容完整，但“writing down on my notebooks”表达不够地道，建议改为“writing them down in my notebook”。同时可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually remember important things by keeping them on my phone or writing them down in my notebook, but I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient.

× No actually I'm not good at memory things and I have a poor memories especially to remember those long phone numbers.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at memorising things and I have poor memory, especially when it comes to remembering long phone numbers.

这里“memory things”用法不正确，应该用“memorising things”表示记忆的动作；“a poor memories”中“memories”是复数，前面不应该加不定冠词“a”，且应使用不可数名词“memory”。建议使用“poor memory”表示记忆力差。

× MMM, yes, as I have poor memory I often forgot something important.

✓ MMM, yes, as I have poor memory I often forget something important.

句中“forgot”是过去式，但句意表达的是经常发生的事情，应使用一般现在时“forget”。

× For me, I think I need to remember some important appointment or some. Necessary delay things.

✓ For me, I think I need to remember some important appointments or some necessary delayed things.

“appointment”应使用复数形式“appointments”，因为前面用了“some”；“Necessary delay things”表达不自然，应改为“necessary delayed things”表示“必要的延迟事项”。

× For example, turn on, turn off the light before.

✓ For example, I need to turn on and turn off the light beforehand.

原句缺少主语和完整谓语，结构不完整，且“before”用法不当，应改为“beforehand”表示“事先”。

× I often remember important things by keeping them in my phone or writing down on my notebooks, but I prefer to keep them in my phone because it's so convenient.

✓ I often remember important things by keeping them on my phone or writing them down in my notebooks, but I prefer to keep them on my phone because it's so convenient.

“keeping them in my phone”应改为“on my phone”，表示存在手机上；“writing down on my notebooks”应改为“writing them down in my notebooks”，表示在笔记本里写下。