Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and specific. Avoid vague phrases like "because it is very useful for us" and try to explain why memorizing is useful to you personally. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because it helps me perform better in my studies and daily tasks.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise. For example, use "although" to contrast being careful with sometimes forgetting things. Also, correct subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

例: Although I am usually careful and have good learning skills, I sometimes forget important things when I am very busy or stressed.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Use singular or plural consistently and avoid unnecessary words like "really" twice. Also, provide a clearer topic sentence and use linking words to list examples.

例: In daily life, I need to remember essential items such as my house keys, mobile phone, and wallet to avoid inconvenience.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting some phrases and using present tense consistently. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid awkward expressions like "I often down notes."

例: I usually remember important things by using my mobile phone. For example, I take notes on my notepad app and create a daily schedule to organize my tasks, which helps me stay on track and not forget anything important.

× However, I consider myself I'm a careful person and my learning skills is very good, usually help me to remember the important things.

✓ However, I consider myself a careful person and my learning skills are very good, usually helping me to remember important things.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'my learning skills is' should be 'my learning skills are' because 'skills' is plural. Also, 'consider myself I'm a careful person' is incorrect; it should be 'consider myself a careful person'. Additionally, 'usually help me' should be 'usually helping me' to maintain sentence flow and correct verb form.

× In our daily life we used to remember the things which we really needed it, for example our home keys, mobile phone or many other things important which are really crucial for us.

✓ In our daily life, we remember the things which we really need, for example our home keys, mobile phone, or many other important things which are really crucial for us.

The phrase 'used to remember' implies a past habit, but the context is about daily life in general, so present tense 'remember' is appropriate. Also, 'which we really needed it' is incorrect because 'which' already refers to the object; 'it' is redundant and should be removed. 'Things important' should be 'important things' to follow correct adjective order.

× I used to remember the imperative things by using my mobile phone.

✓ I remember important things by using my mobile phone.

'Used to remember' implies a past habit, but the context suggests a current habit, so present tense 'remember' is correct. Also, 'imperative things' is awkward; 'important things' is more natural.

× For example, I often down notes on my notepad or create a daily schedule to organise my tasks.

✓ For example, I often write down notes in my notepad or create a daily schedule to organise my tasks.

The verb 'down' cannot stand alone; it should be part of the phrasal verb 'write down'. Also, the correct preposition with 'notes' and 'notepad' is 'in', not 'on'.

× This helped me stay on track and ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ This helps me stay on track and ensures I don't forget anything important.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present tense 'don't forget'. Since the context is about a habitual action, present tense 'helps' and 'ensures' are appropriate.