Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和冗余，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, if someone tells me a series of numbers quickly, I can repeat them accurately and recall them later when needed.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构不完整，建议使用正确的过去时态，并且表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I had an experience last week. On Saturday, I forgot to go to English class because I was very tired and sleeping at that time.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议列举物品时使用正确的语法结构，并避免重复和不必要的词汇。

例: I need to remember six things when I go out, including my phone, helmet, house key, scooter key, and a water bottle.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，并使用连贯的连接词。

例: I usually write important things down on my phone. When the time comes, my phone sends me reminders, which helps me remember and complete my tasks successfully.

× Yes, I'm very good at memory things.

✓ Yes, I'm very good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising'来表示记忆的动作。

× if someone said many numbers in a while, I can repeat again and again

✓ if someone says many numbers in a short time, I can repeat them again and again

'said'时态不对，应使用一般现在时'says'，'in a while'用法不当，改为'in a short time'更合适，且'repeat'后应加宾语'them'。

× if later he's asked me to send that number, I can really good and and say that.

✓ if later he asks me to say that number, I can do it very well.

'he's asked me'时态和语态错误，应为主动语态'he asks me'，'send that number'用词不当，应为'say that number'，'I can really good'结构错误，应为'I can do it very well'。

× Yes, I had a experience at last week.

✓ Yes, I had an experience last week.

'a experience'冠词错误，'experience'以元音音素开头，应使用'an'，'at last week'介词错误，改为'last week'。

× because that time I'm sleeping in my bed and I'm very tired, so I forgot.

✓ because at that time I was sleeping in my bed and I was very tired, so I forgot.

描述过去的动作，应使用过去时态，'I'm sleeping'和'I'm very tired'应改为'was sleeping'和'was very tired'。

× I have 6 things need to take when I go out.

✓ I have 6 things I need to take when I go out.

缺少关系代词'I'，使句子完整，'things need to take'结构不完整。

× The six things include my phone and my helmet and my home's key and the scooter key and water water pumps and so.

✓ The six things include my phone, my helmet, my house key, the scooter key, water pumps, and so on.

列举时应使用逗号分隔，'and so'应为'and so on'，'my home's key'表达不自然，改为'my house key'。

× For me, I will write it down in my phone and when the agenda is coming, my phone will send messages to me and put me remember these things and I will do that and the scenes will entirely finish, so I will be very happy.

✓ For me, I write it down on my phone, and when the agenda comes, my phone will send me messages to remind me of these things. I will do them, and when everything is finished, I will be very happy.

'write it down in my phone'应为'write it down on my phone'，'put me remember'表达错误，应为'remind me'，'the scenes will entirely finish'表达不自然，改为'when everything is finished'。