Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'remembers' thay vì 'remember'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things for a long time. For example, I learned some formulas in secondary school, but I usually forget them after a while.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I once forgot an important memory about the day I lived with my grandmother. Unfortunately, she has passed away, so it was a very important moment for me.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về những việc cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. My phone helps me a lot because I can use it to set reminders and make payments easily.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I usually take notes on my phone and set reminders to notify me when an important event is coming.

× No, I'm not good at remembers for a long term anything.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering anything for a long term.

The verb 'remember' should be in the '-ing' form after the phrase 'good at'. The correct form is 'good at remembering'.

× Uh, for example a formula I have learned in secondary school, I will for forget it when I go to the.

✓ For example, a formula I learned in secondary school, I will forget it when I go to the next level.

The phrase 'I have learned' can be simplified to 'I learned' to match the past tense narrative. Also, 'will for forget' is incorrect; it should be 'will forget'. The sentence was incomplete, so 'next level' is added for clarity.

× Just, uh, I forgot the memorize about the day I lived with my grandmother and now my, she's dead and, uh, such an important I forgot.

✓ I just forgot the memory about the day I lived with my grandmother, and now she's dead, and it was so important that I forgot.

The word 'memorize' is a verb, but here a noun 'memory' is needed. The sentence structure is corrected to past tense and clarity.

× The thing is my fault because in my in this work, I think the phone is an important thing with anyone.

✓ The thing is my fault because in this work, I think the phone is an important thing for anyone.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate usefulness or relevance to someone.

× It can help you so many things like pay, uh, kind of payment and.

✓ It can help you with many things like making payments and so on.

The sentence lacks proper object and preposition. 'Help you so many things' is incorrect; it should be 'help you with many things'. Also, 'pay, kind of payment' is unclear and corrected to 'making payments'.

× Uh, I often take note, uh, important thing in my phone and uh, uh, let them, uh, let them notice me when the important event coming.

✓ I often take notes of important things in my phone and let it notify me when an important event is coming.

'Take note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to multiple items. 'Let them notice me' is incorrect; the phone or app 'notifies' the user. Also, 'important event coming' needs 'is' to form present continuous tense.