Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够完整，句子未结束，表达不够自然且缺乏连贯性。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免中断，并且可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I think my memory is average; I'm not very good at memorising, but I'm not bad either. For example, when I was in high school, I was good at remembering English words and the plots of novels, which helped me in my studies.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子结构稍显简单，且部分表达不够自然。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更连贯且具体。

例: Yes, I have forgotten some important things. For instance, last year I missed an important appointment with my boss because I was overwhelmed with work and had many tasks to complete, which made me lose track of time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意单复数形式，避免句子碎片，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as charging my smartphone and washing my clothes before bed. Also, I must not forget any important appointments with my clients or my boss.

提案: 回答较好，但有重复词汇错误，且表达可以更自然。建议注意细节，避免重复，并用更丰富的词汇描述方法。

例: I usually make a list on my phone to remember important tasks, such as buying tissues and milk from the store or sending documents to my clients. I find this method very convenient and effective.

× I think there are many thing to remember in my daily life such as charging my smartphone and washing my clothes before bed.

✓ I think there are many things to remember in my daily life such as charging my smartphone and washing my clothes before bed.

这里的名词“thing”应该用复数形式“things”，因为前面用了“many”，表示数量多，必须用复数。

× I have a lot of tasks to complete.

✓ I had a lot of tasks to complete.

句子中描述的是过去的情况，前面用了过去时态“was”，所以“have”应改为过去时“had”，保持时态一致。

× I'm making a list to remember important things such as buying tissues and milk from from store and sending a document to my clients.

✓ I make a list to remember important things such as buying tissues and milk from the store and sending a document to my clients.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时“make”，而不是现在进行时“am making”。另外，“from from store”重复，应改为“from the store”。

× buying tissues and milk from from store

✓ buying tissues and milk from the store

“store”前面缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是特定的商店。

× I think with.

✓ （删除该句）

该句不完整，缺少谓语动词，无法表达完整意思，应删除。