Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşunu və qrammatikanı təkmilləşdirmək lazımdır. Məsələn, "more easier" ifadəsi səhvlidir, "easier" kifayətdir. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə etməyə çalışın. Məsələn, fikirlərinizi bir neçə cümlə ilə sadə və aydın şəkildə ifadə edin.

例: It depends on what I need to memorise. If the material is interesting, I can remember it easily and for a long time. However, if it is boring, like vocabulary, I find it difficult to remember without a lot of practice.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və söz seçimi səhvləri var. Məsələn, "password" əvəzinə "passport" deməlisiniz. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha aydın və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə etmək üçün cümlələri düzgün qurun və təkrarlardan qaçının.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times. For example, today I was going to my exam and forgot to bring my passport. I only had my ID card, but it doesn't have a photo. So I had to go back home to get my passport.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə çoxlu təkrarlar və qarışıqlıq var. Fikirlərinizi daha sadə və aydın ifadə etməyə çalışın. Məsələn, əsas mövzunu birbaşa ifadə edin və əlavə məlumatları məntiqli şəkildə əlavə edin. Həmçinin, qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember vocabulary for my SAT and the classes I attend. Also, I try to remember what I have done during the day so that I can follow the steps and know what to do next.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə ifadə tərzini daha təbii və aydın etmək üçün qrammatikanı və söz seçimini təkmilləşdirin. Məsələn, "more better" səhvdir, sadəcə "better" istifadə edin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha qısa və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə edin.

例: I usually remember important things by associating them with related objects or events. This method helps me recall information more easily and keep it in my memory for a longer time.

× If. If it's more fun and enjoyable than I can take to my memory more easier and I will remember it for a long time.

✓ If it's more fun and enjoyable, then I can memorize it more easily and I will remember it for a long time.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already implies a comparative form; 'more' is redundant. Also, 'take to my memory' is not a natural expression; 'memorize' is more appropriate. The sentence structure was fragmented and needed correction for clarity.

× If it's something boring like vocabulary so far so it's not possible to remember it for a long time without hard practice.

✓ If it's something boring like vocabulary, it's not possible to remember it for a long time without hard practice.

The phrase 'so far so' is incorrect and unnecessary here. Removing it improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I've forgotten many times my important things.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten my important things many times.

The placement of 'many times' is awkward. It should come after the object for natural English word order. Also, 'important things' is better without 'my' in this context, but 'my important things' is acceptable.

× For example today I was going to my exam and I forgot to take my passport because I took my ID but I don't have any photo on it.

✓ For example, today I was going to my exam and I forgot to take my passport because I took my ID, but it doesn't have any photo on it.

The phrase 'I don't have any photo on it' is incorrect because the subject is 'ID', so 'it doesn't have any photo' is correct. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× So I went home and and I took my password and they came back.

✓ So I went home and took my passport, then I came back.

Repeated 'and' is a typo. 'Password' is incorrect; it should be 'passport'. 'They came back' is incorrect because the subject is 'I', so 'I came back' is correct.

× Most of the things that they they will remember is my vocabulary for my SAT and that I also classes.

✓ Most of the things that I need to remember are my vocabulary for my SAT and my classes.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect; it should be 'I' as the speaker refers to themselves. Also, 'that I also classes' is unclear and corrected to 'my classes'. Subject-verb agreement corrected from 'is' to 'are'.

× Furthermore, I also remember the things that I have done today.

✓ Furthermore, I also remember the things that I have done today.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× So if I was something so I know I will know the process step by step.

✓ So if I did something, I will know the process step by step.

The phrase 'if I was something' is incorrect; it should be 'if I did something'. The sentence structure was confusing and needed simplification.

× So I would know where I need to go and that's an additional information.

✓ So I would know where I need to go, and that's additional information.

'An additional information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; 'additional information' is correct. Also, a comma is added before 'and' for clarity.

× Because of that I remember it by some events and in a more better way so to keep in my memory for a long time.

✓ Because of that, I remember it by some events and in a better way to keep it in my memory for a long time.

'More better' is incorrect because 'better' is already comparative; 'more' is redundant. Also, 'so to keep in my memory' is awkward; 'to keep it in my memory' is clearer.