Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并且用更准确的词汇表达。比如“sitting alms”应为“setting alarms”。

例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. I often forget where I put my keys or phone. To help me remember, I usually use technology like setting alarms or using reminder apps.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I use my smartphone to set reminders. Also, I double-check my schedule every day to make sure I don't miss anything.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子连接不够流畅，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: Well, I usually need to remember three things in my daily life. First, the deadlines for projects or assignments. Second, my class schedules for the day. And third, the birthdays or anniversaries of my friends and family.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的动词形式，并且注意连贯性。

例: Well, I often use my smartphone to remember important things by setting reminders or using apps. I also make lists and cross off items when I complete them.

× I usually remember things to.

✓ I usually remember things too.

这里的'to'是错误的，正确的应该是'too'，表示“也”。这是代词用法错误，容易混淆发音相近的词。

× I usually use the technologies to remember things like sitting alms or using apps.

✓ I usually use technologies to remember things like setting alarms or using apps.

'the technologies'中的定冠词'the'使用不当，泛指技术时不需要定冠词。另外，'sitting alms'是拼写错误，应为'setting alarms'。

× No, I will use the smart phones to set remind important things and I will have double checks of my schedule every day to ensure I don't miss anything.

✓ No, I use smartphones to set reminders for important things and I double-check my schedule every day to ensure I don't miss anything.

这里不应该用将来时'will'，因为描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时。此外，'set remind'应为'set reminders'，'double checks'应为'double-check'。

× No, I will use the smart phones to set remind important things and I will have double checks of my schedule every day to ensure I don't miss anything.

✓ No, I use smartphones to set reminders for important things and I double-check my schedule every day to ensure I don't miss anything.

'smart phones'应写作复数'smartphones'，'remind'应为名词'reminders'，'double checks'应为动词短语'double-check'。

× The first is the deadline of the project or the assignment and the second is the class schedules, all for a day.

✓ The first is the deadline of the project or the assignment, and the second is the class schedule, all for the day.

'class schedules'应为单数'class schedule'，因为指一天的课程安排。'all for a day'应为'all for the day'，使用定冠词。

× And the third thing is the birthday or anniversary for my friends or and family.

✓ And the third thing is the birthday or anniversary of my friends and family.

'or and'是错误的连接词组合，应改为'and'。此外，'for'应改为'of'，表示所属关系。

× Well, I often use my smartphones to remember important things like setting or using the apps and like I will make list and cross off its item when I complete.

✓ Well, I often use my smartphones to remember important things like setting or using apps, and I make lists and cross off items when I complete them.

'the apps'不需要定冠词，'make list'应为'make lists'，'its item'应为'items'，且需要复数形式，'when I complete'后应加宾语'them'。