Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“marriage things”应为“memorising things”，表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，避免拼写错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things. For example, when studying for exams, I usually use repetition techniques which help me retain information more effectively.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，且内容不够具体。建议练习句子结构，使用连贯的连接词，并提供更具体的细节。

例: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important school project because I was overwhelmed with other tasks. Since then, I have started using reminders to manage my time better.

提案: 回答语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议学习常用词汇和句型，确保表达准确，并举具体例子。

例: In daily life, it is important to stay organized and manage time effectively. For example, I keep a to-do list to remember my important responsibilities.

提案: 回答中存在大量语法和词汇错误，表达混乱。建议学习如何描述使用工具和方法，并练习连贯表达。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using a digital app on my phone. This helps me set reminders so I don't forget appointments.

× Yes, I consider myself quite a good at marriage things.

✓ Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things.

这里'marriage things'是错误的词汇搭配，正确表达应为'memorising things'，表示记忆事物。'a good at'结构错误，应该去掉'a'。

× when studying for exam I used to take a life repetition and making anxiety which helped me retain information more effectively.

✓ when studying for exams I used to do a lot of repetition and make annotations which helped me retain information more effectively.

'take a life repetition'和'making anxiety'表达不正确，应改为'do a lot of repetition'和'make annotations'。'exam'应为复数'exams'。

× This ability has always been.

✓ This ability has always been helpful.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，需补充形容词或补语使句子完整。

× Yes, I have forgotten something important before such as mission dining for a school project.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as missing a deadline for a school project.

'mission dining'是错误表达，应为'missing a deadline'。

× This happen because I was overwhelmed.

✓ This happened because I was overwhelmed.

时态错误，描述过去事件应使用过去式'happened'。

× We motivate managing my time well.

✓ I have been motivated to manage my time well.

句子结构混乱，主语和谓语不匹配，应改为'I have been motivated to manage my time well'。

× Since then I I start use reminding.

✓ Since then, I have started using reminders.

'start use reminding'结构错误，应使用完成时态'have started'和动名词'using reminders'。

× In daily life, is important to remember to stay organizing and manage tight effectively, for example, keeping a rose for getting important responsible in additionally meaning.

✓ In daily life, it is important to stay organized and manage time effectively; for example, keeping a schedule to remember important responsibilities.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语'it'，'stay organizing'应为'stay organized'，'manage tight'应为'manage time'，'keeping a rose'错误，应为'keeping a schedule'。

× I usually remember in falling fame by riding van down in the planner obviously digital app app on my phone.

✓ I usually remember things by writing them down in my planner or using a digital app on my phone.

'remember in falling fame by riding van down'表达错误，应为'remember things by writing them down'，'planner obviously digital app app'重复且错误，应简化为'planner or using a digital app'。

× This map help my recognize ticket and six reminders insurance.

✓ This method helps me recognize tasks and set reminders.

'map'应为'method'或'way'，'help my recognize ticket and six reminders insurance'语法错误，应为'helps me recognize tasks and set reminders'。

× I don't I don't forget I don't forget appointment.

✓ I don't forget appointments.

重复且结构混乱，应简化为'I don't forget appointments'。