Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且直接，但缺乏更多具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体例子，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when I need to remember important information, I usually review it several times to help store it in my memory effectively.

提案: 回答内容简单且句子较短，缺少连贯性和丰富细节。建议使用连接词连接句子，并详细描述经历和感受。

例: Yes, I once lost my key, which was very important. As a result, I had to replace the lock on my door, and it was quite a frustrating experience.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态和语法，使用连接词，并提供更具体的细节。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine. Whenever I encounter something important, I record it on my phone so that it reminds me what I should do.

提案: 回答重复且语法有误，缺少多样词汇和连贯表达。建议改进语法，避免重复，并使用连接词丰富内容。

例: When I need to remember something important, I usually record it on my phone using a smart app, which reminds me so that I never forget.

× Yes, I have lost my key.

✓ Yes, I lost my key.

这里使用一般过去时更合适，因为描述的是过去发生的具体事件。现在完成时强调与现在的关联，而此处更侧重于过去的经历。

× If I met something important I will record it on my phone so it will reminds me what should I do.

✓ If I meet something important, I will record it on my phone so it will remind me what I should do.

条件句中应使用一般现在时（meet），而不是过去式（met）。动词remind后不加s，因为主语是it，will后动词用原形。疑问句语序不正确，应为陈述句语序。

× If I need to remember something important I really record it on my phone.

✓ If I need to remember something important, I really record it on my phone.

句子缺少逗号，增加逗号使句子更清晰。

× I have a smart app and it will reminds me so I will never forget about it.

✓ I have a smart app and it will remind me so I will never forget about it.

助动词will后动词应为原形，不能加s。