Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在重复和语句不完整的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I am a teacher. I can remember all my students' names and sometimes their birthdays. I also retain the knowledge I learn from books.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯，且句子过长。建议使用简洁明了的句子，避免重复，并且补充完整的原因说明。

例: Yes, I have forgotten to bring my keys when I went out. This is very important because without keys, I cannot open the door. My parents and husband work far away, so they cannot help me.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，存在语法错误和重复，表达不完整。建议理清思路，使用准确词汇，并补充具体细节。

例: I need to remember many things in my daily life. For example, at work, I have different tasks from various projects. I must remember the main points of each task and how to complete them.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误和句子不完整，表达不流畅。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并完整说明方法。

例: I sometimes write important things in my diary or smartphone. I set reminders and alarms to help me remember when important events happen and what I need to do.

× I can remember all my class students name and I sometimes remember their birthday, their their birth, their birth date and I can also remember the the knowledge that I learned from the book.

✓ I can remember all my class students' names and I sometimes remember their birthdays, their birth dates, and I can also remember the knowledge that I learned from the book.

这里存在单复数错误。'students name'应为复数所有格'students' names'，'birthday'和'birth date'应使用复数形式'birthdays'和'birth dates'，因为指的是多个学生的多个生日和出生日期。

× I need to remember so many things. For example my work has I have different attacks from different projects.

✓ I need to remember so many things. For example, my work has different tasks from different projects.

单词'attacks'使用错误，应为'tasks'（任务）。这是单复数错误和词汇错误的结合，正确表达应为'tasks'。

× So I need to remember all the the the main point of the work tracks and how how I should do and and.

✓ So I need to remember all the main points of the work tasks and how I should do them.

'main point'应为复数'main points'，'work tracks'应为'work tasks'，且句子缺少宾语，需补充'them'。这是单复数错误和句子结构不完整的问题。

× I sometimes widen the important things in my daily book or in my smartphone and I will set the reminder to remind myself that when the important thing happened and what I should do and also I I will set the alarm to remind me when the.

✓ I sometimes write down the important things in my daily book or on my smartphone and I will set a reminder to remind myself when the important thing will happen and what I should do. Also, I will set an alarm to remind me when needed.

'widen'用错，应为'write down'（写下）。'in my smartphone'应为'on my smartphone'，因为通常说在设备上。'set the reminder'应为'set a reminder'，冠词使用错误。句子后半部分不完整，需补充完整。

× Yes sure I have forgotten to bring my keys after I go after I I I go out Is the key is really important for me because if I don't take it then I cannot open the door and my my parents and my husband work so far away they cannot.

✓ Yes, sure, I have forgotten to bring my keys after I went out. The key is really important for me because if I don't take it, then I cannot open the door. My parents and my husband work far away, so they cannot help me.

'after I go'应为过去时'after I went'，因为描述过去发生的事情。句子结构混乱，需断句并补充连词使句子通顺。