Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點重複（"textual textual content"），且語句不夠流暢。建議避免重複用詞，並嘗試用更自然的連接詞來組織句子，使回答更簡潔且有條理。

例: I think my memorising ability depends on the type of information. For example, I am good at memorising textual content like history or Chinese textbooks, but I find it difficult to remember small daily details.

提案: 回答中有些語法錯誤（"write it write it down"）和不自然的表達。建議注意語法正確性，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

例: I can't recall forgetting anything important because I always note down important dates. For instance, if I have a big test or an appointment, I write it down in my diary.

提案: 回答不完整且有重複（"last last night"），語句不流暢。建議避免重複，並完整表達想法，使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember things my mom tells me. For example, she asked me to buy groceries last night, so I had to run an errand for her.

提案: 回答中有重複詞（"I normally I"、"by by"），且語句稍顯冗長。建議注意語言流暢性，避免重複，並用連接詞使句子更有邏輯。

例: I usually write important things in my diary because writing helps me memorize them better and also helps me organize my time effectively.

× I think I'm good at memorizing the textual textual content, for example, the history textbook or my Chinese textbook.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing the textual content, for example, the history textbook or my Chinese textbook.

The repetition of the word 'textual' is a redundancy error, not a grammar problem from the list, so it is removed for clarity. The use of 'memorizing' is correct as a gerund after 'good at'.

× But it is about I'm not good at memorizing my like little things in my daily lives.

✓ But it's about I'm not good at memorizing little things in my daily life.

The phrase 'my like little things' is awkward and 'daily lives' should be singular 'daily life' because it refers to the speaker's own daily routine. 'My like' is unnecessary and informal, so it is removed for clarity.

× I cannot recall any related memories now.

✓ I can't recall any related memories now.

'Cannot' is grammatically correct but 'can't' is more natural in spoken English. Both are acceptable, so this is a style suggestion rather than a strict grammar correction.

× For example, if I have a big test or I have appointment with anyone, I would write it write it down on my diary.

✓ For example, if I have a big test or an appointment with anyone, I would write it down in my diary.

The phrase 'write it write it down' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'write it down'. Also, 'have appointment' needs an article 'an' before 'appointment'. The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to writing in a diary.

× I would write it write it down on my diary.

✓ I would write it down in my diary.

The correct preposition for writing inside a diary is 'in', not 'on'.

× So I have to run an errand for her and sometimes I think.

✓ So I have to run an errand for her sometimes, I think.

The sentence ends abruptly and the placement of 'sometimes' is better before 'I think' to make the sentence complete and natural.

× I normally I write it down on my Diaries.

✓ I normally write it down in my diary.

'Diaries' is plural but the speaker likely means a single diary. Also, the preposition should be 'in' not 'on' when referring to writing in a diary.

× I normally I write it down on my Diaries.

✓ I normally write it down in my diary.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to writing inside a diary.

× It helps by by writing, it helps you really memorize the thing you have to remember and also it can help you organize your time.

✓ It helps by writing; it really helps you memorize the things you have to remember, and it can also help you organize your time.

The phrase 'by by' is a repetition error. The adverb 'really' is better placed before 'helps' for natural emphasis. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.