Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is honest and relevant, but it contains redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "quite few quite a few" and keep your sentences clear and concise. Also, use linking words to improve flow.

例: I wouldn't say I'm good at memorizing things because I often forget several important details.

提案: Your answer addresses the question well and provides a specific example, which is good. However, avoid repeating phrases like "about her day" twice. Also, try to add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I've forgotten many important things, but the most memorable was my wife's birthday, which I completely overlooked, and it was quite unpleasant.

提案: Your answer includes relevant details but is too long and lacks proper punctuation, making it hard to follow. Break your answer into shorter sentences and use linking words to organize your ideas clearly. Also, clarify unclear phrases like "small tax."

例: In my daily life, I need to remember practical things, such as bringing my kids' wallets and phones before leaving the house. Additionally, I try to keep up with tasks like replying to emails and paying bills on time. Since I can be forgetful, I usually set reminders on my phone.

提案: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question. To improve, you could add a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make your response richer and more natural.

例: To be honest, I can be a little forgetful; therefore, I usually set reminders on my phone to stay organized and ensure I don't miss important tasks.

× I wouldn't say I'm good at memorizing things because sometimes I tend to forget quite few quite a few number of things.

✓ I wouldn't say I'm good at memorizing things because sometimes I tend to forget quite a few things.

The phrase 'quite few quite a few number of things' is redundant and incorrect. 'Quite a few' is the correct quantifier for plural countable nouns. Removing the extra words clarifies the sentence and corrects the plural quantifier usage.

× Yes, I've forgotten about quite a lot of things that are important, but the one I can vividly remember is my wife's birthday.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten quite a lot of important things, but the one I can vividly remember is my wife's birthday.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'forgotten' when referring to things. The verb 'forget' can be directly followed by the object without 'about'. Also, 'important' is better placed before 'things' for clarity.

× I forgot about her day, about her day, and it was not pleasant.

✓ I forgot her birthday, and it was not pleasant.

Repeating 'about her day' is redundant and awkward. Also, 'forgot' does not require the preposition 'about' when followed by a direct object like 'her birthday'. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× Well in my daily life I usually need to remember practical things like bringing my kids wallet and phone with me before I leave the house at the same time I also try to remember small tax such as replying to emails and paying bills on time to be honest I can be a little forgetful so I normally set reminders on my.

✓ Well, in my daily life I usually need to remember practical things like bringing my kids' wallets and phones with me before I leave the house. At the same time, I also try to remember small tasks such as replying to emails and paying bills on time. To be honest, I can be a little forgetful, so I normally set reminders on my phone.

Several issues: 'kids wallet and phone' should be plural possessive 'kids' wallets and phones' because multiple children likely have multiple items. 'small tax' is a typo and should be 'small tasks'. The original sentence is a run-on and lacks punctuation; breaking it into sentences improves readability. Also, the last sentence was incomplete and needed 'phone' added.