Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“where is my phone”应为“where my phone is”，且句子结构重复，建议简化表达并注意语法。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget small items like where I put my phone or my book. However, I can remember important things more easily.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意单复数和词序。

例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important. I usually remember important dates like exams and meetings, although I sometimes forget small things like where I put my phone or book.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“sign some date”应为“save some dates”，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁句子。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates such as final exams and meetings, so I usually save them on my smartphone.

提案: 回答中句子结构混乱，表达不清楚，建议分句表达并避免无意义的内容，突出重点。

例: I use my smartphone to save important dates like exams and meetings. This helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks.

× So I think I don't good at memorizing things.

✓ So I think I am not good at memorizing things.

这里缺少系动词“am”，导致主语和谓语不一致。正确表达应该是“I am not good at...”，表示状态。

× No, I always forget some small things like where my phone and where is my book and I never forget something so important.

✓ No, I always forget some small things like where my phone is and where my book is, and I never forget something so important.

“where my phone”缺少动词“is”，正确的表达应该是“where my phone is”。此外，连接词“and”前后应保持句子结构一致。

× I usually remember the exam States and important meetings and so on.

✓ I usually remember the exam dates and important meetings and so on.

“exam States”应为“exam dates”，这里是词汇错误，dates表示日期，更符合语境。

× Maybe I will use my smart phone to sign some date like my final exam state and some meetings date and something I need to remember it.

✓ Maybe I will use my smartphone to save some dates like my final exam date and some meeting dates and things I need to remember.

“sign some date”应为“save some dates”，且“state”应为“date”，表示日期。最后“something I need to remember it”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× I will use my smart phones to save important dates such as the final exams and some meetings, all my lessons and it helps me know a lot of about myself and it will remember my attention.

✓ I will use my smartphone to save important dates such as the final exams and some meetings, all my lessons, and it helps me know a lot about myself and helps me remember to pay attention.

“smart phones”应为单数“smartphone”，因为通常指个人使用的手机。句子中“know a lot of about myself”中“of”多余，应去掉。最后“it will remember my attention”表达不当，应改为“helps me remember to pay attention”。