Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并避免重复。可以简洁明了地说明自己记忆力不强，并介绍自己如何应对。

例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things, so I usually write them down and review my notes regularly. This method helps me remember important information effectively.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰，建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子说明，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as homework deadlines at school. However, I now write them down and review my notes regularly, which helps me avoid forgetting important tasks.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达需要记住的具体内容，并说明使用手机记录的好处，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as homework deadlines and important knowledge. Therefore, I usually use my cell phone to write down reminders and review them regularly, which is very convenient.

提案: 回答中表达不清且重复，建议直接说明记忆方法，避免重复，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer to write important things down either on paper or on my cell phone because both methods are convenient and portable. This helps me save time and energy when I need to recall information.

× To be honest, I am not good at memory things I really forget, so I prefer to write down and review it regularly when I've forgotten.

✓ To be honest, I am not good at memorising things; I really forget, so I prefer to write them down and review them regularly when I've forgotten.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作；另外，'write down and review it'中的'it'指代不明确，应该用复数'them'指代前面的'things'。建议使用分号分开两个独立句子，使句子更清晰。

× Yes, I had forgotten things important, for example my deadline of the homework at school, but I choose to.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things, for example the deadline of my homework at school, but I choose to.

这里使用过去完成时'had forgotten'不合适，应该用现在完成时'have forgotten'表示过去发生且与现在相关的动作；'things important'形容词位置错误，应为'important things'；'my deadline of the homework'表达不自然，应为'the deadline of my homework'。

× But I choose to write them down and review them regularly is very useful.

✓ But I choose to write them down and review them regularly because it is very useful.

原句缺少连接词，导致句子结构不完整。应添加'because'引导原因状语从句，使句子完整通顺。

× In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of things for my for example, the deadline of homework or my knowledge.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of things, for example, the deadline of homework or my knowledge.

'for my for example'中'for my'多余且错误，应删除；'for example'作为插入语，用逗号隔开。

× I usually use my cell phone to write down and review them regularly.

✓ I usually use my cell phone to write things down and review them regularly.

'write down'是动词短语，'write down and review them'中缺少宾语，应该明确写出宾语'things'，否则句子不完整。

× Will I prefer to write down on my papers or write down on my cell phone?

✓ I prefer to write things down on my papers or on my cell phone.

句首的'Will'不合适，表达疑问句时应使用'Do I prefer'，但此处应为陈述句；'write down'后应有宾语'things'；'on my papers'和'on my cell phone'前应加介词'on'。

× It's very convenient and I can carry them everywhere.

✓ It's very convenient and I can carry them everywhere with me.

'carry them everywhere'表达不完整，通常应加上'with me'表示随身携带。

× It's very convenient and save time and energy.

✓ It's very convenient and saves time and energy.

主语是第三人称单数'It'，谓语动词应加-s，变为'saves'，保持主谓一致。