Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“forgot”应为“forget”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达观点，并避免重复。

例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important tasks. Therefore, I usually make a list to help me remember everything I need to do.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且用词不当（如“Forgotten scenes”）。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并举例说明。

例: Yes, I often forget important things, which can be very frustrating. For example, once I forgot to submit an assignment on time, and it caused me a lot of stress.

提案: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连接词和具体细节。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更多具体内容。

例: I need to remember my daily tasks and the instructions my mom gives me. Therefore, I make a clear list every day to keep track of everything.

提案: 回答较好，但开头“Usually in the normal way”表达模糊且不自然。建议直接说明方法，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually make a clear To-Do List to organize my responsibilities. This helps me stay focused, avoid forgetting important tasks, manage my time effectively, and reduce stress.

× I always forgot a lot of things and especially the necessary things that I'm going to do.

✓ I always forget a lot of things and especially the necessary things that I'm going to do.

这里使用了过去时态"forgot"，但句子表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时"forget"。

× Sometimes I just make a list so that I cannot forget everything I'm going to do.

✓ Sometimes I just make a list so that I don't forget everything I'm going to do.

这里使用了"cannot"，但表达否定习惯动作时更常用"don't"，更符合口语习惯。

× Yes, Forgotten scenes is my daily life and I think it's a horrible thing because something you had to be done these days and you forgot it.

✓ Yes, forgetting things is part of my daily life and I think it's a horrible thing because sometimes you have things to do these days and you forget them.

原句结构混乱，"Forgotten scenes"用词不当，应改为动名词"forgetting things"，且句子中时态和表达不清晰，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× It was a horrible situation.

✓ It is a horrible situation.

前文表达的是一般情况，使用一般现在时更合适，表示这是一个常态。

× I need to remember what I'm going to do next and what my mom told me to do these days.

✓ I need to remember what I'm going to do next and what my mom tells me to do these days.

"my mom told me"是过去时，但"these days"表示最近一段时间，应该用一般现在时"tells"表示习惯性动作。

× Usually in the normal way.

✓ Usually, I remember in the normal way.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整，应补充谓语使句子完整。