Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For instance, I can easily remember important facts from my history classes without writing them down.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容不连贯。建议注意时态和句子结构，表达时要清楚具体。

例: Yes, I once forgot something important because I stayed up late and my memory was weak. For example, I forgot to bring my smartphone to school, which made me feel bored that day.

提案: 回答内容较为清晰，但句子结构单一，表达重复。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更流畅自然。

例: I need to remember my daily timetable because it helps me manage my time effectively. For example, I plan my study, work, and leisure activities according to it.

提案: 表达中存在词汇使用错误和语法问题，且句子不够连贯。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I write important things on memo papers and stick them on my desk or places I often see. This way, I can remember them easily and avoid forgetting.

× I can easy to remember some history or Chinese history subject knowledge.

✓ I can easily remember some history or Chinese history subject knowledge.

这里需要使用副词修饰动词remember，easy是形容词，正确形式是easily，表示“容易地”。

× Yes, I have ever forget something important because I sleeping late that day and my memory is declined.

✓ Yes, I have ever forgotten something important because I slept late that day and my memory declined.

这里使用现在完成时，forget的过去分词是forgotten，不能用原形forget；sleep的过去式是slept；memory declined用过去式表示过去发生的动作。

× The important thing is I forget to bring my smart before I going to school and that day I am so boring because I know smartphones.

✓ The important thing is I forget to bring my smartphone before I go to school and that day I was so bored because I didn't have my smartphone.

forget在这里用一般现在时，going应改为go，表示习惯动作；am boring应改为was bored，表示过去的感受；know smartphones不合适，改为didn't have my smartphone更准确。

× I can remember what I need to do in my mind and no need to write them in the paper.

✓ I can remember what I need to do in my mind and don't need to write them on the paper.

write后面搭配介词on表示“写在纸上”，而不是in。

× And also I am good at study because I am a good skill of memorizing things.

✓ And also I am good at studying because I have a good skill of memorizing things.

good at后面应接动名词studying；I am a good skill不合适，应该是I have a good skill，表示“我有一项好技能”。

× The important thing is I forget to bring my smart before I going to school and that day I am so boring because I know smartphones.

✓ The important thing is I forget to bring my smartphone before I go to school and that day I was so bored because I didn't have my smartphone.

smart应为smartphone，指智能手机；know smartphones用法错误，应该表达“我没有带手机”，用didn't have my smartphone更合适。

× I will rating some important things in the memo paper and I will stick them to my table or somewhere I can always see them.

✓ I will write some important things on the memo paper and I will stick them to my table or somewhere I can always see them.

rating用法错误，应为write，表示“写”；stick to my table正确，表示“贴在桌子上”。

× When I can often see the meme paper with the important things, I won't forget them.

✓ When I can often see the memo paper with the important things, I won't forget them.

meme paper拼写错误，应为memo paper，表示备忘纸。

× I can easy to remember some history or Chinese history subject knowledge.

✓ I can easily remember some history or Chinese history subject knowledge.

easy是形容词，修饰动词remember应使用副词easily。

× I will rating some important things in the memo paper and I will stick them to my table or somewhere I can always see them.

✓ I will write some important things on the memo paper and I will stick them to my table or somewhere I can always see them.

rating用法错误，应为write，表示“写”；stick to my table正确，表示“贴在桌子上”。