Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. As a student, it's important to remember a lot of information quickly, especially in subjects like English and Chinese where we need to recall articles and texts.

提案: 回答内容具体，但表达稍显简单且有口语填充词。建议减少口语化词汇，使用更连贯的句子，并适当丰富细节。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, my mother often reminds me to bring her cane when I leave home, but I sometimes forget it. When that happens, I have to call her to apologize, which makes me feel really bad.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember basic things like classes, deadlines, and meetings. Recently, I also remind myself to eat less because I've gained some weight. I think many people nowadays pay more attention to their health than before.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和句式，避免重复，并清晰表达观点。

例: I usually send messages to myself using the WeChat app, which has a feature for that. This method helps me remember important things because it's hard to keep everything in my mind.

× As a Chinese student what ability you must have is is to remember something quickly.

✓ As a Chinese student, the ability you must have is to remember something quickly.

句子中多了一个“is”，导致语法错误。应去掉多余的“is”，使句子结构正确。

× Because in subject you must to remember a lot of information, such as in the English class you must remember some articles or in the Chinese class.

✓ Because in subjects you must remember a lot of information, such as in English class you must remember some articles or in Chinese class.

“must”后面不应该加“to”，正确用法是“must + 动词原形”。另外，“subject”应为复数“subjects”，因为指多个学科。

× Because in subject you must to remember a lot of information, such as in the English class you must remember some articles or in the Chinese class.

✓ Because in subjects you must remember a lot of information, such as in English class you must remember some articles or in Chinese class.

“subject”应使用复数形式“subjects”，因为这里指的是多个学科。

× Nowadays I think everyone care about their own health than before.

✓ Nowadays I think everyone cares about their own health more than before.

“everyone”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“cares”。

× Nowadays I think everyone care about their own health than before.

✓ Nowadays I think everyone cares about their own health more than before.

主语“everyone”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加“s”，即“cares”。

× Nowadays I think everyone care about their own health than before.

✓ Nowadays I think everyone cares about their own health more than before.

比较级后应使用“more than”而非单独的“than”，以表达“比以前更关注”。

× I always said important things to me because I'm a human, I couldn't remember all the things I must can forget.

✓ I always send important things to myself because I'm human; I can't remember everything, so I might forget.

“said”时态错误，应使用现在时“send”。“must can”是错误的情态动词搭配，应改为“might”或“could”。另外，“to me”应改为“to myself”，更符合习惯用法。